Michida

Finally someone spoke up about the author! I can scold him even if I look at it, but the main character in such a good plot story written by him has a brain problem again! Not to mention the procrastination of writing the plot, it looks like it's full of cannons. I've written a few chapters and I'm still worried about this or that problem. What a great book written by the author! If you don't look at anyone, it will bother you.

The character development in this book feels good, but the writing is too slow, and the description of a lot of details is too detailed. A conversation or an idea requires several chapters. This is not to say that meticulousness is not good, but you should prioritize and expand on any topic you encounter. It is okay to read one or two at the beginning, but reading too much will make people bored and feel like showing off. [Fn=3_5]

After reading the previous article, I realized that the author may not be Chinese, and he also studied fake Chinese medicine. Traditional Chinese medicine should be easy to accept things like Daotian, after all, it is like a paradise. You must have heard a lot about secret realms and so on.

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I can't believe it was updated.

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It's quite good. It's not interesting to read books that are often fought and fought over. It just satisfies people's competitiveness and pride. Only those with evil thoughts will like it. The more they read, the more they become obsessed with it.

What did the author do? ? ? Is this book still being written? ? ?

This book has some innovative ideas in the front, but it's too slow. Where did I copy so much about beauty masks? It accounts for 20% of the entire article.

It's obviously the weekend, and I have to go out for a meeting in the morning. This is already the third meeting this month, so I'm afraid I really don't have time to update on the weekend. After all, I have to take care of my children when I go back, and I can't stay up late every day doing this. In fact, as I said before, eunuchs don't exist, but the update cannot be effective. After all, you have a family and a family, so how can you just play.

Have you forgotten your author's Qidian account? I'd better change my vest.

How can I save 2,000 words in a week? If I take a week off and write one week, I can write 3 chapters in a month! Give it a thumbs up if you support it! ! ! ! ! ! !

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The writing power and ideas are still there, but the biggest problem is: the plot is too slow, and there are too many non-plot contents expressed, so that the author himself cannot carry this burden to advance the plot. A good story is mutually acceptable. If the author is the only one who is "passionate" and there is no reader, this "passion" will definitely be difficult to last. More than 1.2 Million words have been written, and the protagonist has passed all the exams and the restaurant has not yet opened. Even the main "three views" of the protagonist in terms of medicine, wealth, and helping his hometown have not been established. Therefore, if the writing style does not change, it will be difficult to avoid prison.

I'll save you from destroying the sun and killing the beauty in a few chapters, but there are still many inconsistencies in this article. Pig's feet is very careful about pure spaces, but it doesn't care about the reality that pollution is everywhere.

Uncle, when will it be updated? I've been waiting for almost half a year. [Fn=2_6]

What about Chapter 54? ? Chapter 54 is missing! ! !