End of the World

I followed many Gensokyo fanfics at first. This book was originally called The End of the World in Gensokyo (it should be). Then I kept following it until the ending of the first part, where I tortured the main character and then lost my memory. The ending of the second part involves being betrayed by your lover, abusing your master, and still losing your memory. The third part is just, very confusing. The author cannot express what he is thinking. Then I remembered the ending, and then it was gone. What about revenge? It's really frustrating to watch. . . I've read countless Gensokyo fics, and the first male protagonist who feels aggrieved is Yuze.

I haven't read the last two chapters yet. . . But after reading the first two paragraphs of the postscript, I felt chilled. . . Naturally, they are all black when cut open! ! ! Don't tell me that the cloth is all black! ! ! ! !

("▔□▔)/We are still good friends even though we are not arrogant!

As expected, the vice-captain is a pain in the presence of the captain 😁

It's Xiao Ding's deal! ! Why are there four swords again! ! !

Although I have some doubts, I still recommend voting┏(゜ω゜)=?🥺🥺

One of the five elements that build the world The great primordial flame Turn into the light that breeds life Become the light that punishes evil While bringing stability and happiness Becoming the frozen misfortune that destroys the cold darkness Its name is inflammation His job is sword Let's be realistic! Devour my body and become my strength! Its meaning is to kill! Hunt the Witch King! ! This is the flame given to diaosi by the world, and all current charges will be reduced to ashes under the flames! Current charging must die! ! !

Why does it feel like the protagonist has to die a few more times...

("▔□▔)/Why are you so embarrassed?! (=?ω?=) Very nice~~~~~~

The girl's head hangs high... Is the girl dead?

Faggot, faggot, you're a big faggot! ! ! ! ! PS: I asked you to let us take the chapter name and swipe you for a month! !

==Huanyun, try complaining about your bad grades again. . .

I think the setting is so mediocre, so I won't complain about it. Tianze, who became a heavenly being, stayed in Youdingtian for a hundred years, right? Then he returned to the lower realm and revealed that those people in the lost country were ordinary people with immortality? Can you live this long? Tsk

Fanfiction, fairy tales, science fiction, fantasy Huanyun, have you ever seriously thought about which of the above types this novel should belong to? When I first read this book, the first volume had a bit of a fairy tale style, but because there were too few, the main scene was in Japan, and the names of the characters and the general settings were all in the style of Japanese comics, so I quickly ignored this. Starting from the second volume, the Xianxia style gradually became stronger. However, since the second volume focused on character description and the characters in the volume were basically related to Xianxia, ​​the items with a strong Xianxia style that appeared later did not make me feel uncomfortable. But in the third volume, although the world view begins to expand and more and more characters appear, whether it is the text or the unfolding of the plot, this is already a fairy tale. After reading these recent chapters, I feel very uncomfortable. The awkwardness in the center is extremely serious. Is the author writing fan fiction or other types of fiction? If it is Xianxia, ​​then the previous fan-style chapters are nothing. If it is a fan, why are other styles so serious? For example, Kuroyukihime appears in the third volume. I always wonder, there is a character named Kuroyukihime. Is she really Kuroyukihime? Why is she completely different from the Kuroyukihime I remember, or is she just another character with Kuroyukihime's name and appearance? Huanyun, can you answer these questions of mine? ------------------------------------------------------------------ How many different writing styles can you control in this kind of book? If you really want to write this book well, first determine the overall style of the book. Don't change the style around, and don't let your own preferences affect your work. Don't deny me that this is your preference. Seeing how you are almost obsessed with playing Sword Three, do you seem to be a person who doesn't like the fairy style? I have been pursuing this book for so long, and I am just saying this because I don't want you, Huanyun, to ruin this good book because of some minor problems. Finally, he said: "Young man, you still need to practice. A bright future is waiting for you. Work hard. There is a long way to go to make this book a masterpiece." PS: This has nothing to do with the book. Yun Jiang's temporary setback is nothing, stand up and masturbate! !

Only then did he react. . . We are not natural, you bastards!

Author, how do you plan to deal with Budou-chan who betrayed (maybe) Yuze? I won't ask you to spoil it, but let's talk about whether we forget each other in the world or something else, and what kind of emotional ending is it? I would like to make a suggestion. I personally think that a big detour later in the plot would be a good idea~