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After reading the first chapter, I was instantly speechless! The author doesn't play like this! ! You can write: golden finger after time travel. Ability. System... The golden fingers you write about pig's feet must be within the framework of this YY article, and must conform to "common sense" and "common sense" Although they are all YY novels, Golden Finger does not require too strict logic, but at least it must be imaginary and come up with a reasonable framework. In real life, can someone with musical talent + singing and dancing talent even become a person like Mike? .? When I see this content, I feel like a 2B idiot young man is bragging. The author should quickly return the awesomeness of pig's feet to cows. Cows also need sex. I hope the author can correct the content of the first chapter. It reads too inconsistently.

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I haven't seen it for a long time and it's getting better and better!!!!!!

Then Li Zongsheng is Li Zongsheng, right? He was just forty in 1999, where did he get fifty? Your deskmate has also changed from Gao Xiaosong to Li Zongsheng. It's so hard to feel immersed in it. 😵😵

It was okay at the beginning, but when I saw Pig's Feet minimizing his own interests as soon as a girl cried, I was speechless. Is this a society? It's unreasonable.

I will not comment on what the author wrote. But for me, the sense of immersion in this book is a flaw. I read about 20 chapters, and I didn't feel immersed at all. I can't find any similar memories of this book's timeline, characters, and events. It would be fine if this book was written as an urban novel, but if it were written as a Chinese novel, I don't think it would be enough. Except for the similar names, I can't see the similarities between the Chinese and Chinese novels. Maybe the author will write about the relevant parts later, but at least from the parts I saw, I couldn't tell it was China Entertainment. Another point is that changing the name is not a good idea. If you change the character, at least change it to one with the same pronunciation or similar glyphs. Star Development System and The Great King are some of the most exciting Chinese entertainment novels I have read. I hope the author can read them when he has time. I have written so much not to say that the author's writing is not good, but in this era when Korean entertainment is dominant, I hope that more and better novels will appear in Chinese entertainment. This is just my humble opinion. If the author finds it reasonable, I will be very happy. Otherwise, just laugh it off and don't take it to heart.

I'm not being too serious here, but it was really awkward to read, and there were mistakes in the first five chapters. I would like to ask if there was "Jiaduobao" in 1999?

I don't know what the author is pursuing. Maybe I'm not profound enough, but I really want to say that the lack of a sense of substitution in the novel is a fatal flaw. It's up to you, the author, to choose the songs. It's just a matter of personal appreciation. But it's really hard to feel immersed in the book when you change the lyrics. It's hard for people to immerse themselves in the book. Every time I see the lyrics, I feel like I've been woken up by a hammer. I'm not saying whether your changes are better than the original, but it's hard for people to agree with you once you change them. Just because you have to write the lyrics to suit your scene setting, it's not better for you to just skip it. I'm a bitch and sang along with the lyrics you changed. I really want to slap myself in the face. Why do I have to be a bitch and sing along? I think many people must be the same as me. Finally, I just want to say that changing the lyrics is really a trick!

Foreigners don't count. People pay attention to personality. . . There are very few celebrities in our country who are tall. . . Affect photogenicity. Most female celebrities are less than 1.50 Meters tall. You are not 186. . How to match it. Do you find it in the middle? Movies and TV are all affected. It can only be paired with those tall girls. . .

It was always interesting until Chapter 236 when the author said he wanted a harem, so he had to abandon it.