First Grade Martial God

As a person who travels across the earth, close relatives will not be spared? As a person who has had good experiences in time travel, he looks like a pig brother and can't move when he sees a woman and leaves.

According to current calculations, the fourth-grade sect will have a sword emperor, so how strong will the first-, second- and third-grade sects be! In addition, according to the current writing method, let alone 45 million words, it will be difficult to finish the book even with 7 or 8 million words, unless the subsequent plots are perfunctory or even completely unfinished! ! ! I hope this won't happen~🤝

Brother, Guiguzi has never been to this world, he knows everything? The beginning of the book was good, but after the underworld, it became a mess. It was so messed up that it was hard to read. . . Bye now.

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I changed my vest, but I still don't write it anymore.

It hurts not to finish the first chapter. Just travel through time, and there will be an underworld, and the underworld will be like the underworld, and you can still control people from other worlds. It really hurts.

The biggest flaw of this book is that the classification of training levels is disgusting! So, I can't even stand a single chapter!

When I saw the third chapter, I immediately jumped away.

After reading Chapter 5, this is basically a copy of Dou Po Cang Qiong. It just changed the name. At least 80% of it is the same.

A girl's voice suddenly came from the corner in front of the corridor. The sound is clear and moving, like the cry of an oriole, and as smart as a pearl on a plate. Just by listening to the sound, you know that its owner must be a beauty. ——Seeing this, it is impossible to continue reading.

Haha, change the name of the routine of Fighting to Break the Sky 😤😤😤

The so-called aristocratic family must attach great importance to family rules. If the following violations occur, it is a miracle that such a family can be passed down.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a verbose novel. If he wasn't the protagonist, he would have been beaten to death long ago. I'm speechless if I can write Chapter 4.5.6.7.8 For a fight. It would take hundreds or even thousands of words to introduce a skill. Even though I have said so much, I just feel that the numbers are too watery. It's so watery that it's a big flood. 😰😰😰

I canceled the first chapter, bye 🙂

Looking forward to your next set of works, keep up the good work!

Come on, author! [Fn=2_3]

Come on, author! [Fn=3_3]

It's okay for novices to read, but if you're tired of reading "Dou Po" novels, this novel is really not interesting.

I just read a few chapters, but it's not much different from Dou Po.

Personally, I feel that your writing is quite fresh, and your technique is much more proficient than mine. The plot structure is wonderful, making people want to read on, and the description process is detailed. It is not as rough and unclear as mine. It is hard to imagine. Regarding the plot, I seem to have written only one-third of it because your exposition is very comprehensive and thorough, and the work is pure. I feel close to your work. A good beginning is the top priority of a work, and the author has done it. Especially Han Chen, I particularly like this character. When I started reading, I felt it was a bit boring, and then I wanted to turn it off. Later, I found it interesting, and after reading a few chapters, it was pretty good. The author's description contains many techniques, and some rich insights. I can see that the author can clearly describe some difficulties that are beyond your level. It's not like me writing over and over again, it's still the same few sentences, but I will study more.