Stand-Alone Version of Great Monk

To be honest, I don't believe in →_→Buddha, so this book is not suitable for me to read, and the setting of the protagonist is somewhat contradictory. On the one hand, he insists on being a chivalrous and righteous man, but on the other hand, he does not know how to do not do to others what you don't want others to do to you. Your persistence is a joke. After seeing this, your spirit of implementation will collapse... Maybe some people will say that I said It's not comprehensive, but please think about it carefully. The evildoer is someone who does not impose his will on others, causing misfortune to others, murdering, setting fires, raping and plundering. No one is willing to accept such treatment. The protagonist connives Qu Feiyan to shave the hair of Hengshan disciples. Do you think he doesn't know? He knows. Do you think he doesn't support it? He likes it! But to the victims, they are still a woman with a beautiful nature, not to mention they are at this age. Look what he did? Think back to what he said in Shaolin? He was inconsistent, and he became someone he hated...

Let's put it on the bookshelf and read it first. There are only four comments after I finish it, which is quite sad.

When I first read it, I felt that the narrative pace of the previous chapters was rather slow. There were too many explanatory texts about the little monk in the plot, and the inner drama of Kasha that appeared in the description of the characters was written from Kasha's first perspective. In fact, the effect was not good. The switching of perspectives prevents readers from getting into the characters, and the narrative, inner drama, and character description should have a certain proportion. When fighting the Sinking Demon, it is the battle description. In the middle of the fight, a stick is swung out, but a few irrelevant inner dramas are inserted, which immediately ruins the rhythm... I hope it will be better later.

This book is finished and there are only 7 comments in total, which I didn't expect.

Really! The finale made us want to cry. The author's artistic conception remained consistent. The dream of the little monk really moved us! There are still people who write such wonderful stories. The world is not so hopeless! Come on, Mr. Author! We've turned a corner!

I didn't have a good name for it. It's really become a stand-alone game

Single machine, real single machine, sixth post

Kowloon New Law, you posted a phoenix totem at the end, oops, I'm drunk too