Martial Arts World Men's Trip

Forget it if the first two chapters are missing, let's not talk about it. It will be missing when the later chapters are a little interesting. Are you guessing that it will disgust the readers?

I didn't want to talk at first, I just wanted to read quietly, but after reading more than 60 chapters, I couldn't bear it anymore. Let's not talk about how badly the characters are ruined. None of the characters have IQs. Of course, this is a novelist's routine, and there's nothing much to say about it. Secondly, various common sense errors, 1. Dongfang Bubai is a man and has nothing to do with women. 2 Yilin is a nun, and Qunyu Yuyuan is a brothel. A nun will not go to a brothel to drink with men, and a hero will not go to a brothel to discuss important matters if he respects his identity. 3. Jin Yong's stories range from the Song Dynasty to the Qing Dynasty (if you include A Qing and even the pre-Qin Dynasty). There is nothing wrong with the author putting them all together, but please blur the background of the times. Otherwise, when Jin Bing met Ba TuLu, would he have found his true family? No other examples are given. What I couldn't accept the most was that the author was missing too many chapters. The main story had various plot jumps. The poor handling of the characters in the story was a writing problem, but the lack of chapters was a problem of attitude. It was unforgivable and I decisively abandoned the book. I hope the author will learn his lesson and write better works.

Thank you guys for trying the poison and paying homage to me

Chapter 3: Dissuade! Don't you have anyone to sworn to? Become a sworn sworn thief? ! Tian Boguang! Alas, you thief! Forget it if you don't kill him, why don't you still become a sworn sworn brother? What do you think? I'm really curious about what kind of person the author is in real life...

This kind of setting is full of contradictions, unpleasant and difficult to write. Just like writing Marvel, the timeline is difficult to control. Although sometimes I want to watch Qiao Feng vs. Hong Qigong, but I can't just put it together just because I want to watch it. Different eras are incompatible together (one Northern Song Dynasty and one Southern Song Dynasty). There are too many Jin Yong fans. Now I really want to read Gu Long's fans. But most of Gu Long's fans are system novels and occasionally go to a Gu Long world to complete the mission. I have never read the authentic Gu Long fans.

When those worlds are mixed together, I immediately don't want to see them again.

If you see a nun calling you "sister", go to the nunnery and try shouting. I won't be able to beat you to death.

The mixed martial arts world should not be written like this. Jin Yong's martial arts novels are all corresponding to an era and have continuity. After mixing them together, logically, either some people are not yet born, or some people are dead. Several well-known novels with the same era background should be selected to mix the martial arts world. For example, Huang Yi's "Shattered Void" and Jin Yong's "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" are both in the period of the late Southern Song Dynasty's resistance to the Mongolian Yuan Dynasty. The worlds of these two books can be mixed, and then find novels written by well-known writers such as Liang Yusheng, Gu Long, and Sima Ling that are based on this era.

Just call you Brother Xiao, ah, Sister Yu, you are bullying me. I vomited when I saw this, just read it as a novice, you must disgust me

Give up the trap decisively, there are too many pitfalls. There are missing chapters and few words, and some chapters are written illogically.

The writing is good, but I think it's a bit inappropriate to rate Jiumozhi as one of the Six Ultimates. There should be many better than him, such as Xiaoyao Erlao

After reading the introduction, I want to say that when these martial arts worlds are mixed together, it really means nothing If you like martial arts fan fiction, you can write infinitely many good things

How could such a poisonous novel be written? Is AI really that powerful now?

This kind of mixed martial arts world is really uninteresting to watch.

Why hasn't the author written a martial arts book like Xia Ke Xing? It's also very good. I feel like vomiting after reading these books every day.

You are a time traveler with a system and the ability to rise. Everything in the world is nothing to you. Even if he is the protagonist, will you still think highly of him? I'm really going to vomit after they become sworn sworn friends one by one.

If you can't handle one book well, why don't you give me five books?

The world in which these five novels of yours are set is still not good. I plan to write a novel based on the fusion of five novels: The Passionate Swordsman, The Legend of Chu Liuxiang, The Legend of Lu Xiaofeng, The Scimitar of the Full Moon, and The Peerless Twins, so that the protagonist knows what hell level is.

The first chapter is gone at the beginning, there is nothing left to read.

Licking the dog until there is nothing left

I vomited after seeing the oriental girl in the introduction.

In this novel, the author is so self-indulgent that he seems to have no brains.

Author, your first chapter is lost.

It's not on the same level at all, the whole thing is too messy.

Let me just say that in the third chapter at the beginning, I became sworn sworn brother with Tian Boguang.

All kinds of pimps to collect CP, 💩

Looking at the profile settings, it reminds me of the rebirth of Zhao Zhijing. But for that book, logic doesn't matter. If the core of your book is martial arts, it will be too difficult to write well.