Martial Arts Legends Across the Planes

The beginning was alright, but later on, they even took Madam Ma into their harem. It's disgusting that they could bring themselves to sleep with women like that.

Having read the entire article, I feel the author's writing skills really need improvement. Is the author a novice? Personally, I think there are three major problems: 1. Logically speaking, how can the protagonist's martial arts skills be so poor even with the help of the system and knowledge of the plot? Are you kidding me?

The book is good; I read it every day. It has many merits and is considered a gem among similar works. However, there are a few flaws that I just have to point out. So, this review will focus less on the strengths and more on the weaknesses that bother me. Advantages: 1. The writing is decent.

I've read dozens of chapters, but there's no sense of immersion and many plot holes. For example, finding the Nine Yin Manual and immediately learning it, then finding the Nine Yang Divine Skill and mastering it as well—it's like those Buddhist and Taoist ideas are just about instant mastery. Sigh.

Nine Yang, Nine Yin, Dragon Subduing, and a whole bunch of other divine skills, yet he was beaten to a pulp by Qiu Qianren. If you can't write that, then don't fucking write it. He keeps leveling up and practicing, learning so many peerless divine skills, yet he still gets beaten. What kind of divine skills did you learn? All sorts of adventures and resources are given to your protagonist alone, and you still keep padding the word count. This is ridiculous; even a pig could fly!

Most of it is copied from the original work. I'm reading fan fiction. I'd rather read the original than read your book.

From the moment you travel into the story, you're already changing the fate of the characters. Just learning the Nine Yang Divine Skill would get you a warning. Getting involved in the Legend of the Condor Heroes storyline and changing the plot isn't really changing anything. Either don't write about time travel, or just change the plot directly.

Eight years ago, this is all it's got? The Star Absorbing Skill can lead to the Innate Realm? And in *The Deer and the Cauldron*? I hate these kinds of plots that forcefully break the established rules; they seem so childish now.

The pace of writing martial arts novels is a bit too fast now. In the future, you could write it so that the protagonist learns martial arts theory in each world and then develops his own martial arts skills in the main world!

I hate it when people say the plot can't be changed.