Martial Arts Legends Across the Planes

It's fine in the front, but in the back, even Madam Ma has taken over the harem. It's disgusting that such a woman can prey on her.

After reading the full text, I feel that the author's level really needs to be improved. Is the author a novice? Personally, I feel that there are three big problems in writing: 1. In terms of logic, the protagonist is so poor in martial arts even with the help of the system and knowing the plot. Are you kidding me? It's not that I like the invincible flow, it's just that it's very illogical to write it like this. A person with a normal IQ wouldn't be so stupid when traveling through time. 2. In terms of women, this is what makes me want to complain the most. In the early stage, I fell in love with Huang Rong, and it became the same as the single heroine. Later, I accepted a few more but had a relationship with a few and abandoned them. This kind of writing is really nondescript, either with a single female protagonist, or with a wide harem who can do whatever she wants, either way can attract a group of readers. The protagonist's behavior not only seems extremely hypocritical and prudish, but also seems irresponsible and courageous, and he does not dare to do whatever he wants. 3. In terms of thinking, the ideological level is too low. The protagonist always flaunts that he is not a bad person, and there is no nonsense burden on him if he kills more people. Everything he does is subject to moral constraints. Have you ever thought about the nature of morality? The essence of morality is a product of common imagination achieved by human beings through language description. Its essence is just imagination and does not exist at all. It is sad to be bound by something that does not exist. Most readers will have a sense of immersion when reading novels, and they want to be free from the constraints of law and morality in novels and take off the pretense of life. In the novel, he is still hesitant and restrained, which is really unlikable.

This book is a good book. I read it every day. It has many advantages and is considered a fine book among similar works. However, there are a few shortcomings that I cannot complain about. So this book review will focus less on the advantages and more on the shortcomings that stuck in my throat. Advantages: 1. The writing is passable. I have found a lot of similar books to read in the past few days, but the writing style of some primary school students is difficult to read. 2. The main world is somewhat interesting. It uses the world structure of Swordsman. In essence, the main world is also one of the dungeons, but it is just set as the base camp of Pig's Feet. The main purpose of most readers reading such books is to read replica plots composed of familiar novels. The main world can also be considered a copy of Swordsman, so readers pay more attention to the main world. 3 Pig's Knuckle's martial arts are all developed by oneself, not by the system adding points. 4. There is no numerical quantification of martial arts. Disadvantages 1. The power balance between the main world and the dungeon is unbalanced. In the dungeon plot, pig's feet are heroes, but in the main world, pig's feet are bears. Of course, this may be related to the author's setting But one thing must be understood. Most people who read this type of book come here for the plot of the copy. Life in the main world is so frustrating, I don't even want to subscribe! The plot of the 2 main world, especially the part with Xiang Wentian, completely ruined the second advantage. The reader is immersed in it and is tortured to death. Are pig feet still modern people? After hearing the Secret Sword Manual and hearing Xiang Wentian hearing about the Demon Cult, don't you know the relationship between the main world and Swordsman Jianghu? As stupid as a pig, Huang Rong was still poisoned? Is this a literary youth or a sadist? The pig's foot's force was abused like a dog in the main world. In the 3rd copy of Tianlong, Mu Wanqing wants to marry Pig's Foot, but Pig's Foot refuses, and then runs to Wang Yuyan to flatter her. Although the author has written about Pig's Foot's change in women's thoughts, the change is too fast. Comparing the plots of Mu Wanqing and Wang Yuyan, Pig's Foot is a scumbag. There is no objection to Pig's Foot accepting women, but being chased by a woman and then accepting her is called a love saint, and Pig's Foot's behavior is called a scumbag. Also, Pig's Feet has forgotten the purpose of coming to the Tianlong dungeon! If you don't go back quickly to save Huang Rong, you will still be a follower behind Wang Yuyan! Let the dungeon time pause, rescue Huang Rong, and then return to the Tianlong dungeon to improve your strength. Even if the dungeon time is out of control, it will only take a few days to rescue Huang Rong. 4 In my impression, Mu Wanqing is flesh and blood, and Wang Yuyan is just a vase. Mu Wanqing does not want the pig's feet. However, regardless of Huang Rong's poisoning, she still compromises for Wang Yuyan, which is really puzzling. 5. Pig's feet in the main world make it impossible for people to replace them. It's too frustrating. The author quickly improved the strength of the pig's feet, Don't worry that you won't be able to write about Pig's Feet after it reaches the top of the main world. Readers read this kind of book just for the copies. If readers feel frustrated, they will take the book off the shelf and not even read the copies. Suggestion 1 Don't worry about not writing. The one where Jin Yong has the highest martial arts is the Xia Ke Xing. After the Tianlong copy, go to the Xia Ke Xing. Then in Gu Long's novels, there are Chu Liuxiang, Lu Xiaofeng, Ximen Chuixue and other dungeons whose strength is higher than Jin Yong's. Let's not talk about bug-level martial arts like Xie Xiaofeng. After that, there is a copy of Huang Yi's novel "Xian Tian Shi Shi", where there are as many masters as dogs, and then there is a copy of "The Legend of Shushan Swordsman". 2. When the pig's trotters improve their strength in the future, excellent heroines can also be included in the harem. If the pig's trotters are not taken away, it will not only break the hearts of the women who are attracted to the pig's trotters, but also make us readers feel aggrieved. We are here to relax. Who wants to see a dead daughter and a daughter given away? As for the method of persuading Huang Rong, you can make Pig Feet willing to be seriously injured and dying for Huang Rong, and let Huang Rong know Pig Feet's intentions. Maybe after getting married, Huang Rong alone is not enough to serve the pig's feet, or maybe after gaining eternal life, she won't be too lonely. Tails: I'm too lazy. Besides reading, I usually dive. But the shortcoming of this book is that I can't bear it! If this continues, I can only give up on this book, but I can't bear it, so I'll write a book review. I hope it will be useful!

After reading dozens of chapters, I had no sense of immersion and there were many bugs. For example, I found the Nine Yin Manual and learned it directly. Then I saw the Nine Yang Magic Technique and learned it again. In Buddhism and Taoism, I always said that I knew it. Why

Jiuyang, Jiuyin, Dragon Subduing and a lot of other magical skills were beaten into pieces by Qiu Qianren. If you can't write them, don't fucking write them. You keep upgrading and practicing. After learning so many peerless magical skills, you still get beaten. Which magic skills did you learn? All kinds of adventures and resources are given to your protagonist alone, and the word count is so fucking low. Is this a fucking pig that can fly?

Most of them were copied from the original work, and I read it from a fanfic. After reading your book, I might as well read the original work.

From the time you time travel into the plot, you have already changed the fate of the characters in the plot. If you learn the Nine Suns Magic Skill, you will be warned, and if you participate in the plot of the Condor Shooting, changing the plot is not called a change. Otherwise, don't write about time travel, otherwise you can directly change the plot.

That's it for the book written eight years ago. Can the Star Absorbing Technique also achieve innateness? Or in the Deer Cauldron? I hate this kind of plot that forcibly destroys the setting. It looks so childish now.

The pace of writing martial arts novels is a bit too fast now. When writing in the future, it can be written so that the protagonist learns martial arts theory in each world and then develops his own martial arts in the main world!

What annoys me the most is that the plot cannot be changed.