Dark Martial Arts Lander

It looks a bit messy and the sentences are confused.

Do you regret cheating a dragon? ! ! Kanglong has regrets! ! !

Each chapter is incomprehensible to write and read.

What darkness are you talking about? Do things according to rules, say you don't care, have no ideas, and have no ideas to go back to do it. The sour taste of hypocrisy is everywhere...

The writing is so messy, rubbish

Looking at the way and purpose of the protagonist's actions, I can only describe it in four words: I don't know what the protagonist is doing. I have no idea what the protagonist is going to do? The protagonist's confidence comes from looking down at others. The protagonist thinks he is very powerful. In fact, I feel embarrassed when I see it. The protagonist is very inexplicable.

What kind of sweeping monk is Murong Longcheng paying you back? Xiaoyaozi. Do Sweeper Monk and Murong Longcheng deserve to be paired with Xiaoyaozi? Still the same person?

The protagonist is a loser who doesn't want to travel through time. He just went to one picture and wants to show off (ー_ー)!! It hurts.

Those who say they are not loyal to the sword, I am also drunk. Don't you know the top ten warriors? Some people think that being true to oneself is also a form of martial arts, right?

Some people say that the writing style is not good... I can switch between several styles at will, especially Gu Long's, and my skills are already very deep.

This book I accidentally discovered in 2013 made me madly obsessed with this type of unlimited martial arts novels for a year. I remember that the update of the novel was very slow due to the author's health. I was silently worried about the author at that time. I don't know how the author's health is now. There are always new works, and it seems that he is fine. It's a pity. After reading the new books, they are all eunuchs. The author may have quit the Internet literary circle. I still want to thank the author for having this book, which gave me a pleasant experience. Thank you.

The author has written 9 novels and 7 eunuchs. He is really the king of eunuchs (￣ε(#￣)☆╰╮o(￣ Pan￣///)

I saw the end of "The Condor Shooting" and I can't stand it any longer. The character of the main character is a complete mess and I don't understand anything. He probably has schizophrenia.

Classic, the first book on the system

Well, I watched a volume of Your Condor, and I didn't feel any excitement in the whole process, and I couldn't see any sense of involvement in the plot. I don't know if it's good or not later on, but I don't think it's good. I don't recommend it.

I feel so mechanical and controlled by the system. And I won't write about the main world later, so what's the use?

I said, even if you don't like it, don't say that to others. To be polite, tell the author what the shortcomings are. The author is also a newbie, and there are many areas that need improvement. Just like Chapter 371, the first paragraph has some incoherent tone. These are the author's shortcomings. We need to tell the author these shortcomings so that the author can write better and better. If no one dislikes a book and says the author is a waste, then what kind of book should a new author write? They might as well not write it. If they don't write it in the end, what else are we looking at? If you have the ability, go ahead and write a book that won't be scolded by others.

When you talked about starting from Shuzhong, I remembered a topic mentioned in "Rong Zhai Essays". The central point of the topic is probably that Shuzhong is a relatively evil place. Generals who lead troops to conquer Shuzhong basically have no good end, and those who use Shuzhong as their territory and live a closed life can basically survive for two generations. In fact, there is another point that is not mentioned in the book, but many Sichuan people themselves agree, that is, talents in Shu should not stay in Shu behind closed doors. Once they can leave Sichuan and enter the Central Plains, they will have a great chance of achieving great achievements. Among them, the reason why Liu Bang was able to take over the world from Shuzhong was because he had secretly crossed Chencang and left Shuzhong from his own generation.

To be honest, I thought it was pretty good at first, but it wasn't until the second world, which was Lu Xiaofeng's world, that I suddenly felt bad. The author actually began to imitate the writing style of the ancient master. Suddenly the dialogue and interaction of various characters became inexplicable, saying some "specious" and inexplicable words, and then each other suddenly understood what the other meant. This plot style made me feel like I suddenly wanted to abandon the book. Because it is obvious that the author is not good at this style and just forces the arrangement. I think no matter how good the ancient master's style is, the one that suits you is the best. In order to forcefully imitate, the author destroyed his original narrative style. Instead, he felt like painting a tiger instead of a dog.

The writing is not good, the subscription is too expensive, what does the author have to say?

Oh, Spicy Pie Mama doesn't seem to have a Western Sichuan dialect. In my impression, it's more like Wei Xiaobao's Yangzhou dialect. Over there in western Sichuan, there are immortals like Banban and Guizi.

The author of the nine books is still first-rate. I can only say that the author is very perseverant.

Sign in carefully. After signing this, there will be another one! ! ! !

Only half of the Nine-Yang Divine Art has dissuaded me from my obsessive-compulsive disorder 😰

Chapter Thirteen: Poisoned to death, the protagonist writes a villain and becomes the righteous one. The more righteous you become, the more poisonous you become. Farewell.

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Consider letting the protagonist create the secret skills in Fengyunli 😁😄 The strongest Yuanji Moko Wuliang in Fengyun, the strongest secret skill in Fengyun created by Patriarch Bodhidharma 😃 You can arrange for the protagonist to be able to create it after learning the Shaolin I Ching and cleansing the marrow. 😊😚

You can just write at home during the Chinese New Year and wait until the Chinese New Year is over to update it together. We will just keep it for a few days and fatten it up before you know what to do.