Mortal Girl's Journey to Immortality

It's a very good book, I didn't put it down halfway through. Give the author a big 👍

A very good author. If you look at it, the author's writing style is really great. At least it seems that time has passed without you noticing. It is a very fluent and interesting article. As for the male protagonist, I personally feel that this is a fairy tale. If the male protagonist is too important, it will not be beautiful. The main heroine is the main theme... Like?...

I remember reading Yi Zhi before. It looked very good. I only read it when I saw it was by the same author. I'm a little disappointed, the heroine is too kind to the sect and doesn't hold back at all. She never thought that she was forced to do so, and now she still doesn't know her true identity. If her identity is revealed and the sect wants to take action against her, what will she do? And the deep affection for family is so strange.

I really don't like the male protagonist (Xiang Tian)

The more I watch the heroine, the less I can stand it, it's too pretentious. Did the senior sisters treat her badly? Well, in the end, I broke the hearts of my sisters again and again because of this man. It is normal for a disciple of a sect to obtain treasures when he goes out to practice, and it is normal for him to give them to his sect. Those magic treasures were not forced upon him by his sect, he had to hand them over himself. It's not a good idea to have a great opportunity. What a treasure hunter. When you get an opportunity, use it when you need it. It's normal to give to the people you want to give to if you don't need it. If you don't want to give it, don't give it! On the contrary, I feel that the protagonist has broken their hearts time and time again and wants to give himself a reason to leave the master. This can only be said to be weak. This is still the case after ten lifetimes of practice. This is not infatuation, this is man-licking. If a modern woman traveled through time, forget about such a man. What is sincerity, loving you sincerely and then hurting you sincerely, this is not love, this is psychological abnormality. Maybe it was calculated from the beginning. For the sake of his immortality, he committed suicide in the first life. I have always felt that his senior sisters were very kind to her, but it was a pity that he did not know how to cherish them. He always felt that he was giving away those treasures, so he broke their hearts again and again. Did the teacher force her? If she wanted me, I would put two big earrings on her. On the contrary, I feel that she has not even cultivated as a human being, but when she should be a person, she feels that she is cultivating an immortal, and when she should be an immortal, she cultivates a human being. She should be thrown into the fantasy world of the modern world and experience several relationships before she understands that even if she is cultivating love, she cannot use licking a dog as a cultivation practice. Even mortals know how to let go. Immortals, immortals, are they so extreme? Immortals are also human beings. How come there are immortals and no one, and there are no immortals even if there are people?

The opening chapter is really well written, portraying the open-mindedness and tenacity of a little orphan girl in a special image. But since she joined the sect and grown up, she started to be all kinds of pretentious after lying on the resources. Basically, she is a sick man, either physically or mentally ill. I am also drunk when writing Xiuxian like this, it is more like a martial arts...

…😵😵😵 After reading more than a hundred chapters, I was really shocked by the love, hatred and hatred in this book. The hostess handled the situation in a mess. It was clearly not a matter of life or death, but the hostess was stunned and wanted to live or die. Her character is even more unique: she constantly fantasizes about being killed, constantly tries to get into trouble, and constantly doubts life, but she can't find a way to avoid it, and it's almost ridiculous... The heroine cries, the supporting characters cry, they cry big and small, they cry non-stop. The key is that the description in the book is obviously not up to the level of crying, which is embarrassing. The treasure hunting and fighting skills are quite enjoyable, but the human nature and sophistication are really discouraging. (I haven't read the following article so I won't comment)

I like the author's one finger very much, but I really don't like the heroine in this article. Pretentious, entangled, suspicious, and stupid! Especially for Ye Wentian, it was unbearable!

The golden finger is too wide open, and it can kill several foundations in one Qi training period. Why don't you just write about her ascension.

Is this cultivating immortality? This is the daily life of a squeamish and fragile little girl... Although it is the first book, the three views are too strange... It is completely different from the subsequent books...💔💔

I have watched a quarter of the time, but I haven't finished it. I feel more and more disgusted with the Shuiyue Sect. They are like blood leeches. Every time the heroine has a big opportunity, she is handed over to the sect in the end, and then she is given a small reward. When the heroine encounters trouble, she is always shouldered by herself. Whenever something goes wrong in the sect, the heroine needs to come forward. Those so-called senior sisters are all asking for it as a matter of course. When something happens, they can only act as an afterthought. It's super disgusting. It's the ultimate drag. No matter how you look at it, it's better for the heroine to be a casual cultivator than to join the Shuiyue Sect.

This book is really hard for most people to read. It tells the story of a neurotic and depressive ancient Madonna and a vampire sect.

I can't stand it. This heroine is so mentally fragile, how can she still cultivate as an immortal? I feel like if she hadn't been the heroine, she would have collapsed a long time ago and practiced some shit.

The heroine has a golden finger, but when she encounters setbacks, she becomes hypocritical. She is afraid of this and that, and wants to live or die. Is this kind of character right?

Before this, I became a disciple and exterminated the family, and was forced by the sect. I thought it was a literary style with a big structure, self-improvement, and a big world view. But in the end, I went around and joined the sect again, stayed in one place to practice, and lived to practice immortal literature. I understood that after all, I am a female, it is love, love, love, In daily life, you don't even think about the plot you want to watch. You don't write about the key points when writing, and you waste words on trivial matters. This is not delicacy, but poor writing skills that fail to grasp the key points. After writing for a long time, there is no substantial content. This is a common problem of female apples.

After watching "The Order of Immortals", I was mainly surprised by "The Order of Immortals". Therefore, I endured it again and again, and saw more than 500 in my life, thinking that there would be surprises later, or that the heroine would change significantly, but in the end. . . . Apart from feeling aggrieved, I just want to scold my mother. I can only say that the heroine is a lunatic. I should give up and watch the second part.

I hate the Shuiyuezong and the senior sisters so much. Especially after the heroine returned to the Shuiyuezong, she really seemed like a leech as a book friend said. She kept asking for things. If anything happened, the heroine would always be there to protect her. I was so angry that I couldn't stand it anymore and really wanted to give up.

After reading dozens of chapters, I felt that there was too much logic that I couldn't bear. The writing on the secrets and magic weapons was good, but as soon as I dealt with people, when it came to human relations and the handling of the emotions of the protagonist and the supporting characters, the whole article was very witty... The main logic just fell apart.

The heroine's character is so weird! There are so many inexplicable and incoherent plots that the heroine dislikes her more and more.

After reading it for a while, I then read The Order of Immortals. Among the three books, this one is definitely not as good as the last two. I feel that the heroine's character is not very good. She feels sad when she sees sad things and feels sad when she sees other people's happiness... Now that I've seen Love Poison, I really can't stand it anymore. I feel like she's so cruel to myself.

It makes me so angry that there is no likable character.

I like the author's other two novels very much. The early reviews of this one scared me. I thought it was particularly bad. I never made up my mind to read it. I recently opened it and read it. In fact, after getting through the first hundred chapters (in fact, many people complained about the character in the first hundred chapters, I feel that the author's writing is successful) the heroine is still very slutty. Those who haven't read it are intimidated. Don't worry, the master is still the master.

I liked Wang Min a lot at first, but as I look back, I still like Lin Qing more.

Break the jars! Nothing can be broken, nothing can be established! Break and then stand! Write a great book! Ha 😊

The opening plot is familiar. I think I tried poison in Xiaoxiang before, but I didn't have the courage to read it after reading the book review.

Chapters 80, 96 and 447 are missing. Can the author update them? The plot is a bit disconnected

There is a recent book shortage. Do you have any good novels to recommend? In addition to this book on my bookshelf now, I also read "The Mortal's Story of Immortality" and "The Monk's Family". As everyone knows, "The Monk's Family" is almost 3 million words, and I feel it's okay. The author's writing is very exciting, and the adventures are one after another. Looking at the later stages, the articles are not messy, and there are more than a thousand chapters now, with a lot of foreshadowing, and the map is getting bigger and bigger. I just like this kind of grand world view setting. What is commendable is that as the map becomes larger and larger, the author has also made the various supporting characters very fleshed out. It tells a family story, probably a novel about a group of cultivators. I think this is more difficult to grasp than a novel with a single protagonist. It is not easy to get all the way to this point. I thought it would be a trap at first, but so far, the plot constructed by the author is very rich and the reading is very smooth. The character descriptions are just right, including demeanor, dialogue, appearance, etc. The copy tasks of the article and the main tasks switch naturally. A small problem is that in some chapters, the family ranks are inconsistent. The author can make these basic settings a dynamic item, so that there will be no differences as the context goes. In short, the writing is very good, the setting is grand, the plot is ups and downs, the characters are full, and the reading is smooth and natural. I recommend it.

Tan Zi's book is quite good, but the golden finger is a bit wide open.

It's very interesting. I listen to it while walking and read it when I stop. I finished it in a few days. I like it and look forward to more high-quality books coming out.

The more I look at it, the better it looks. I forgot to comment.