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Yo~ Hey guys, I'm back. Although I said I didn't want to read this vest's book anymore, I later found out that I had a lot of time this semester, so I decided to come back and continue writing conscientiously! However, because I haven't read the book here for a long time, I felt that there were some problems in the book, so I decided to take it out and revise it from scratch, just to get familiar with the plot again. But because it is modified based on the original text, the plot is unlikely to change too much. But in order to be able to adjust future writing ideas, we will make some necessary modifications to the language structure and plot foreshadowing. First, change the person's pronoun from first person to third person, and other modifications are tentative. I will revise and make some notes based on the content in different chapters, so the days are lost here! Because this article has to be started from scratch, there will be problems with the order of the chapters on the mobile base and the chapters on the Android/ios client. The problem of moving the base cannot be solved. However, students who use the Qidian mobile client can find this book, click it, and find the option to "redownload this book" below. After redownloading, there will be no problem. In short, there has been no update for such a long time. Everyone must have forgotten the plot, so just watch it again***w 😁 Below is the change log.

I don't want to obey you! ! If you open it again, I will find a way to ruin the new book.

Author, one of the reasons for his lack of popularity may be that old readers don't know that this book has been updated.

I still remember that this was the novel I was following when I first bought my mobile phone. I read The Eunuch myself. Looking back, it has been almost ten years and I am about to graduate from college.

The title cannot be changed. Please advise me!

I have the Orange QQ group, but I haven't looked at it for a long time. It seems that the name has been changed by him. I don't know who it is. Damn it.

Emmmmm, what do you say? I came back to dig graves.

Although I am a diver, I decided to take a dip this time. Chengzi's "Game" has been pushed to revision. So far, I have read all Acts 1-3. As a reader who has followed all of Chengzi's books, without further ado, let me summarize the advantages and disadvantages. Advantages: Sister Chengzi's writing style is more fluent, less wordy and lengthy than before, and the complaints are more appropriate. It is not full of complaints like some of Chengzi's books. Although it looks funny, there are very few essential plots in the true sense. In my opinion, complaints should be made in the right place, so that after a large number of plots, it not only has the benefit of adjusting the reader's mood, but also can make up the word count... At the same time, the plot is full of praise. Although I don't know what other readers think about it, in short, I feel very good. The setting of the personal main line is unique and refreshing. Reading other online game novels is just grinding monsters, leveling up and trampling people, which is not interesting at all. I hope that the subsequent settings and plots of Chengzi will be super high school-level and good-looking. The psychological transition of Cha Ye from a man to a soft girl is much more natural than other novels, unlike other authors who only touch upon it in a few strokes. Although I suspect that a large part of the reason why Chengzi Hua wrote about the psychological description in his pen and ink is because Chengzi himself thinks it is cute to write like this... Anyway, it looks very cool! Next comes the shortcomings... To be honest, I personally think this book has many shortcomings. First of all, the scene is insufficient. Cheng Zi's description of the environment rarely appears in this book. Do you want us readers to imagine the protagonist's battles and daily scenes on our own? If you simply say that the BOSS battle scene is an underground factory... How can anyone imagine it? The impact of the lack of scenes is the lack of atmosphere. Although the battles are well written, there is always a lack of tension in online games to push BOSS... I hope Chengzi will write more environmental descriptions Secondly, there is a lack of detail. This can be seen from Chengzi's description of the appearance of tea leaves at the beginning. Cookie-cutter descriptions. . . Although it can be combined with the cover, I still hope that the image of the characters can be imagined simply from the book. What Chengzi has to do is to intersperse things that belong to Chengzi's fantasy among the cookie-cutter descriptions. There is also the description of the main characters Xu Sheng, Enos and Gulan. Except for Xu Sheng's final sacrifice in the third volume, which made him take on a new look in my mind, the presence of other characters is really low. Even though Enos is the evil queen, my impression of her is only evil. Although I admit that Chengzi's writing is less than the two characters of Gulan and Enos, I still hope that Chengzi can do better and outline the characters in detail before the main plot comes. When the main plot comes, he will use a lot of ink. This is the writing style that I, an old reader, hope that Chengzi, as the representative writer of our ** online nerd light novels, can do it. Third, the protagonist's interpersonal relationships. This is actually not a shortcoming, but as a perfect controller, I still can't help but complain about it. Damn, is this game a stand-alone game? Until the end of the third volume, the only interaction the protagonist has with the player is with the Mesopotamian Guild, OK! ! It doesn't feel like an online game novel at all! Although I can understand the setting of otaku being socially incompetent, didn't Orange say that Cha Ye is really very social in the game... Therefore, as a reader, I sincerely request Sister Chengzi to arrange some plots where the protagonist interacts more with other players. Fourth, the number of characters. I said that there seemed to be too few characters in this book... As I said above, I hope Orange can do better! In each of Chengzi's works, the number of characters is small, but on the other hand, it reflects the author's insufficient control ability. But I can also understand that Chengzi wants to completely control the book and sets fewer characters, but I still hope that Chengzi can be bolder. Only by trying it over and over again can Chengzi's control ability really improve. The above is my evaluation of this book. Chengzi can adjust the macro direction of the work as he chooses, because after all, some comments are based on my personal preferences and emotions. Finally, I sincerely hope that Chengzi will not be discouraged by poor grades, because even if you keep TJing, there are many divers like me who silently support you in every unfinished book.

Alas, when will Orange be finished?

1. Orange, what game are you playing? If possible, I will join you. Don't worry, there is absolutely no problem with my skills. 2. Can you borrow a little bit of the setting from your novel, that is, the part where you wear a helmet and become a girl? Because I also want to write a novel recently.

This account is fifty years old?

I recommend Douluo Dalu: Fantasy Moon Sky Horned Beast, which also transforms into a lily, but it doesn't transform from the beginning. Although the writing is not very good, at least it has completed Chapter 423.

Better written. . . I hope this book can be completed

A truly ancient book, Eunuch Chengzi

🤫 Live coding may be boring

It's not that Chengzi has moved to remove the dirty ♂Kemeow, the new ID seems to be called Demonic Old Chengzi

Long time no see, where did Orange go?

I watched it many, many years ago, about 6 to 8 years ago.

Archeology, this is my entry-level novel. I miss the feeling of opening the door to a new world when I discovered oranges. My favorite is Amethyst Nocturne. What I most want to see the unwritten chapters is the two-dimensional fantasy of the stars and the sea. What I miss most is selling my soul to Lord Lucifer. Totori's journey to another world made me very interested in Jadeite. Now my QQ location is still set in Florence.

Shouldn't the essence of online games be how to make players willingly spend a lot of money?

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Didn't I post it once before? I didn't notice any changes, but I hope it will be updated soon and I'll see the follow-up soon.

Doesn't Orange no longer use this number?

Choosing a name has always been a problem for everyone. Haven't you seen a bunch of non-mainstream Martian texts in a certain Penguin? The title of pig's trotters should be "the favored one", which is probably quite high-end.

I feel like there is something wrong with Chapters 10 and 11. The mobile phone is the same as the computer. First, the two chapters are the same, and then the link to the previous chapter cannot be connected. I don't know if it is my own problem.

Two chapters are repeated, and there is a problem with the connection with Chapter 9. How the middle-aged man appeared and what the tea leaves were called were not mentioned. If there are any other problems, I can't find out for the time being. After all, I only found out that this novel has been updated again today, and I haven't finished ACT2 yet. However, although the author said that the previous chapters have been deleted, I feel that it is exactly the same as before. I don't know if there were changes later.

The protagonist is also very cute, but in reality, if you don't pay attention to exercise, you will really gain weight (dense fog)

It's amazing, I'll look at it again

Kirito: I know you, your name is Shiba Tatsuya, and you are an unparalleled master among demons. Tatsuya: I know you. Your name is Kiritani Kazuto. You are a nearly invincible strong man in the sword. Kirito: I have superb gaming skills, allowing me to play countless games. Tatsuya: I have super powerful magic, which helps me defeat endless enemies. Kirito: I have skills that others don't have. Tatsuya: I have magic that no one else has Kirito: The US emperor sent the strongest special forces soldier, and I made him in the game Tatsuya: The American emperor sent the most powerful magician, but I defeated her in reality Kirito: Even though I'm very low-key, girls still notice that I'm special. Tatsuya: Even though I'm very low-key, girls still notice that I'm special. Kirito: I have a wife. For her, I can defeat the GM of the game. Tatsuya: I have a sister. For her, I can kill the Chinese fleet. Kirito: There is always someone who wants to date my wife and thinks he is better than me. Tatsuya: There are always some scumbags who want to pick up my sister and think they are better than me. Kirito: I will use my strength to kill him Tatsuya: I also played my part in killing him. Kirito: I can kill 30,000 Japanese and Korean players with one sword Tatsuya: I can kill a Chinese fleet with one shot Kirito: My sister loves me and helps me Tatsuya: My sister loves me and helps me Kirito: I have several confidantes Tatsuya: I have several confidantes Kirito: Among all the swordsmen, I am the most handsome Tatsuya: In all the demons, there is no one more handsome than me. Kirito: They say I look like a character in the **Qidian online game novel Tatsuya: They say I look like a character in **Qidian fantasy novel Kirito: If there are any similarities Tatsuya: It's just a coincidence I saw this in the comment area and it made my hands itch... Well, it needs to be completed.

If there are still people who have not updated to the original progress of balabala or something, just pretend that I didn't say anything. Let me reiterate here that starting from this volume, the plot will have nothing to do with the old text. Please do not treat this book based on the plot of the old text. All speculations are wrong. If you still expect this article to take the original route, then I can solemnly tell you that it can be removed from the shelves. Of course, the new plot will not be worse than the original one. I hope you will support it~