Zhushengting

After archaeology, let's talk about some poisonous points that may have been tolerated in the past but cannot be tolerated now 1. Extreme preference for certain elements, such as: "Wolf", "King", "God", "Son", "Dragon", "Evil", "Gold", "Black", "Xuan" and "Blood". . . Welcome to add 2. Extremely anti-historical, that is, the heroes in the history books are written as bears, and those condemned by the history books are written as heroes, such as: "Qin Shihuang", "Liu Bang", "Xiang Yu" and "Zhao Ji". . . 3. Extremely middle-class, such as: Prince's Mansion, Princess' Mansion. . . Suicide for love (in game). . . I was afraid of the hero's army, so I arranged a duel. . . 4. Extreme conspiracy theory, this is a common routine in old books, so I won't give an example. . . The rest are small problems For example: women fall in love with male protagonists at every turn, the data is collapsing, and they are cynical (a certain sentence "Men cheat because women are not attractive, women cheat because men are incompetent." I am so nervous on the outside, but tender on the inside. How did your parents get together...) Of course, the above content is purely ridiculing. I know this is an old novel, and I spent a lot of time with the author's The Chronicles of Evil Shadow back then, but now that I'm reading it again, I really can't bear to look at it. . .

1. The protagonist's learning is too messy. He doesn't even know what skills he has. He bombards him day by day without classifying his skills. 2. In the national war, the protagonist did not take the initiative and was almost destroyed.

The author's writing style is calm, and the description is basic. It is suitable for publishing physical books, but it does not meet the taste of most people on the Internet. After all, old book friends account for the majority of readers who appreciate the author, and real old book friends only account for a part of all book friends. Therefore, the author was not born at the right time. If the author was born early and wrote the book when paper books were popular, he would definitely be titled in one book and sharpen his sword for ten years. I wish the author all the best. However, we can vigorously develop audiobook versions of our works and cooperate with storytellers: First, contact a certain group of people who tell stories (the first choice is the author's personal fans), Secondly, gradually contact car radio stations to submit articles (for example, Tomb Raider Notes, whose writing style and author have their own merits, have radio platforms to promote listening books) Finally, if the book becomes popular, publish a physical book. What Tu Zeng can do, he was born at the wrong time, sigh! Sigh! Sigh!

I hope Shadow can review Forge Holy Court again. I remember seeing it on the Qidian homepage during the peak period of Zhu Shengting. When I clicked in and took a look, I was really shocked. The grand background of the historical fairy tales, the game's reward mechanism, and the protagonist's courageous and good luck to fight for continuous development. Of course, there are many opportunities in the early stage and it is a bit far-fetched. Arguably the best part of the book ends with the First Emperor's southern tour. After the founding of the country, the world turned against Qin, which was also very good. But the collapse of combat power is a big problem. After the eight great loose immortals ascended, a lot of loose immortals came out? Even the small foreign countries behind them had dozens or even hundreds of scattered immortals. The ten true immortals in the Jin State Ceremony turned into the dozens, hundreds or thousands of true immortals who came to the world? After ascension, he experienced the founding of the country alone. According to Shadow, something happened in reality and he was in poor condition. But I think there is no need to write an upper bound even if the state is very good. The contrast is too great, and the Lord of the lower world becomes an ant in the upper world. The development is also quite strange. For example: originally when I saw the protagonist in Fighting the Immortal King, she was still an ant, and I thought it was a big pit and a big foreshadowing. However, when I saw the Fighting Immortal Emperor again, she was already in the final battle, and she became a combat power with no impact. Also, although this book is about fighting for hegemony, to be honest, most of the battles are about fighting alone. For example, the development of power in this book relies on the system to reward Qin Shihuang in the early stage, which is quite reasonable and interesting. In the later stage, it basically relies on surrender. Can the Immortal Emperor be surrendered if he wins?

After archaeological research, it was discovered that there are no eternal classics in online articles, because the viewing angle of readers is always changing. There is a reason for the writing style that has been eliminated in every era. I felt very happy when I read this book, but now it makes me very sick. The same text has a different taste when read. This sacred book was completed 10 years ago. Now read it again. A few chapters will dissuade you. How can there be an eternal classic with a population of more than one billion. In addition to work related to the four classics. Look at how many people can still read the Four Great Classics. The TV movie adaptation of Jin Yong's novel is okay. Take it and read it. See if you are disgusting. Take away the aura of being a great person and look at the essence of it, which is just a piece of writing written by Golden Finger.

One more thing, I advise you not to be nostalgic about archeology. Trust me, your tastes have changed. Don't ruin the classics in your memory. So stay away from archeology and let the good memories stay

I read this book back then, it seemed to be a txt download. I thought this book was really good. Now I wanted to read it at Qidian, but I saw a group of trolls. I was also drunk. If I didn't read the book, why would I come here to complain? Tsk tsk. I need to list a few books from the same period. A certain emperor, a certain god, and now I'm complaining about the plot of this book. Why don't you give birth to 🐔?

I have read hundreds of chapters, and every time I win with less, and the most important thing is that I don't use any strategy. Even if the difference in strength is 10 times, I still win in the end. It is not a tragic victory, but a great victory. I want to say that you are writing an anti-Japanese drama? Write the enemy in such a bad light. I want to say that there is nothing wrong with the author writing that the protagonist is victorious in every battle. If the troops are equal, just crush them. The weak can defeat the many. The weak can defeat the strong. You should use some strategy. You can win even if you are drunk.

After reading more than a thousand chapters, I feel that the more I write, the smaller the layout becomes. I won't talk about the various pretense and making enemies before. I don't know what kind of national war will happen after a thousand chapters. Let me talk about the national war a thousand chapters ago! In the beginning, the national war was fought with such passion, and the nation was united with pride, and when it was promoted to the dynasty, the whole world was the enemy. What did it rely on? It depends on the pride and unity of the nation. No matter how rogue Liu Bang is, or how overbearing and hostile the overlord is, in the face of righteousness, we still put down our prejudices and unite with the outside world, and you even took advantage of the Donghuang Bell! Of course, you can also say that this is your own plan, so I won't say more. But what did you do at the back? It was too much to collude with foreigners to stumbling upon Liu Bang when he was promoted to the dynasty. How is this different from a traitor? How you fight your own people is all your own business. What does it mean to collude with outsiders? Originally, I thought that the protagonist contacted Emperor Guangming to have some conspiracy, but it turned out that he was a complete traitor. Before, we talked about national anger and national justice, but now it is a complete traitor style. Can't you just turn it around? For example, the various targeted words you said before when Old Liu was promoted to the dynasty were all calculated to lure those foreign forces to take action and then work together to annihilate or severely damage them. Wouldn't it be easier to fight a foreign war in this way? Don't worry about Lao Liu and Lao Xiang sitting on the big tail. Since you have chosen the road of imperial hegemony and you don't even have such a little confidence, you should go home early to wash up and sleep! Destroy those troublemakers first, and then no matter how you fight against them, that's all your own business. The winner will continue to move forward with the legacy of the loser.

It's a pity. If I had been writing game novels, I feel that the author would be stronger. It's a pity that I switched to writing fantasy. Now it seems that this novel may have many shortcomings, but this was all many years ago. It was really a masterpiece at that time.,,,,

I really can't stand it anymore. So many people looked down on the powerful King Wu Heng. No one took refuge. He had such a huge advantage in the early stage, but he didn't even make it into the top three in the power rankings. He already had tens of millions of troops, and each expedition was less than one million. In the end, the ones who took advantage were special units. Do you still need to take advantage when you have so many troops? Just fight head-on and directly destroy the opponent. Fighting against Vietnam's beast civilization is also weird. If you gather an army of five million, what beasts dare to attack such an army? If a county is gone, you still only bring tens of thousands of people to fight. And then the protagonist's skills are still many heads and feet, is there any use for chickens? I really don't understand what's so great about turning into a centipede, it's just disgusting.

The protagonist's character is the biggest poisonous point. He will blame everyone if anything goes wrong, but he can get by in other places. This character description is really intolerable.

Ahem, it is said that after entering Taoism, the body will be reshaped. Will a woman who is not a virgin become a perfect body? I feel that if this is the case, Zhao Ji, the sister-in-law next door, and Wang Yiman from the lower world will be perfect bodies by then. If they are included in the harem, they should not be considered second-hand. The harem in this book feels like a world away from this one, but men all have a possessive nature. Those who read the book like YY and hope to have more harems~~. Is it normal for the emperor to have three palaces, six courtyards, seventy-two concubines, and a harem of three thousand beauties? And follow up and go back to Pangu Heaven and Earth, otherwise the girls will become young women. 😃

As title. It feels very uncomfortable that the territory is scattered here and there, and it is also inconvenient for management and military affairs. Can it be connected into a whole? Use the sigh of the sky to quickly defeat the remaining forces in Canada, just in time to occupy the entire North America, and then push through the Bering Strait towards Asia and attack the Russian Federation. Unless these countries and regions of Canada can form an empire by then, and other empires and even the government are involved, it will be much more difficult and almost impossible. If we keep them, they will definitely be attacked by South America and Canada. It is better to eliminate Canada quickly. Then we only need to defend South America in Latin America, which will be much easier. With the sigh of heaven, it is almost effortless to destroy Canada. Moreover, at this time, various leaders and senior officials must be intensely discussing reorganization and striving for benefits. They have no time to manage the army. This is probably one of the reasons why the alliance has withdrawn. No matter what, now is the time for Dahuan to launch a counterattack. No matter what, the enemy's overall power and territory must be greatly weakened. It doesn't matter even if there are immortals and gods who stop it, because the immortals and gods are currently very weak and the time has not come yet. Don't be afraid of him. By the way, it was said before that Dahuan conquered and recruited many immortals and gods during this period, achieving the purpose of serving as the representative of the upper realm and the immortals and gods. Are there all those? Also, if the establishment of another government will seriously affect the protagonist's number one position in the world, it feels like what will happen if there are a few more gods? Even if the fruit status is the same, the difference in real strength is too big. For example, the protagonist, when he first returned, was still at the god level fruit status as he is now, but now he is the protagonist when he returns from all the abuse. In addition, now that Dahuan has conquered most of North America, why is there no mention of a series of changes such as the increase in luck? It seems that the more luck you have, the more and higher fruit positions you can confer, and the greater the bonus. Conquering the returning immortals is also the best way to greatly enhance your luck.

I don't think it's as good as Evil Shadow's original story. And then Evil Shadow's original story is unfinished. It's a pity.

I am also drunk on the male protagonist. If you only focus on feelings, others will almost kill you, but you let him go. I don't want to say how many times you have let him go. The author's writing is really bad. The more you write a good book, the more sad it becomes. Reading a book is not for the purpose of being sad.

After reading hundreds of chapters, I feel a little uncomfortable. I won't complain about the chaotic data. I fight a battle and annihilate the enemy with less than one-tenth of the enemy's strength. Then I lose one-tenth and say the loss is too great. The same goes for fighting the Southern Barbarians. The protagonist always kills the troops at will, and then for no apparent reason the leader leaves the team and runs to fight in a duel. Later, he confidently scolds Jiangdong, and after the death of the Southern Barbarian King, he lets his subordinates go. It's so good that it feels like eating shit in your mouth. It's really bad.

Finally, the author said what happened when the defendant went to court?

The most incomprehensible thing is that in all the orthodox and unorthodox fairy tales, all creatures in the world are trying their best to incarnate as humans (except for the freaks who practice Buddhism). As a result, the protagonists are all kinds of monsters (the mythical beasts are also monsters). No matter how powerful the witch clan is, they have failed, and the evil Donghuang Taiyi has been knocked down from heaven. Could it be that the protagonist is a descendant of the witch clan or the demon clan? Are you going back to your ancestors? I thought that the star tribulation of the Zhou Dynasty would finally unite all the Dharma to form the Great Dao, but in the end, it turned into a so-called Dharma Body with three heads and six arms. Still holding the banner of China all day long, go and look at traditional Chinese mythology. Is there anything related to the fact that China has an egg with the Wu Clan, Chi You, and the Donghuang Demon Clan? They are all evil spirits or stepping stones that were destroyed by China. Moreover, the so-called powerful people here are so shameless. They don't care much about what others do. Only the protagonist jumps out to target him no matter what he does, and he gets slapped in the face every time. There are also countries in the national war, power data, various settings are unreasonable, every time the strength is compared, the protagonist always has weak points, no matter how you look at it, you will lose. In the end, he wins every time. When it comes to the Gami coalition, hundreds of millions of undead coalition forces are useless. The protagonist becomes a true god in seconds, kills two emperors, destroys six emperors, and then retreats. What kind of national war is this? Just clean up the high-end combat power and send troops to directly occupy it. What kind of war is it? I really can't stand it anymore.

. A novel I read in high school. . . Although it was a bit poisonous, I was very happy watching it at the time

As title. It's totally okay to think that the leader of Africa is Gilgamesh. He is the oldest king with clear records in the history of the world. He is also a famous mythological and legendary figure. There are many legends and his achievements and abilities are also spread. Not that the title is truly the oldest king. Although the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors of China are relatively old, they are not the real owners of the country. The image of Gilgamesh can refer to the golden Gilgamesh in the anime Fate/Stay Night.

Before I became an immortal, I was still very good in the lower realm, and the plot was pretty good. But when I reached the immortal realm, the plot suddenly stopped working. It really ruined a good book. It might as well have been finished when I ascended.

First of all, let me ask a question, what is the subject matter of your book? Zhu Shengting, you didn't know clearly at the beginning about the characters in this book. Are the scenes written in this book something that was cultivated in the real world or the virtual world? Can it still be used in the real world?

As title. As Lu Bu himself said, no matter what, it is an explanation of his fate and a new life. If you don't choose this, and you think about it, does it count as breaking fate and changing your destiny? To gain a new life, if Lu Bu broke his fate and changed his destiny, wouldn't all the factors such as his cultivation strength, mental state of mind, wisdom, aptitude and luck have to be greatly improved? Becoming stronger, better and more perfect? He is far from comparable to the Lu Bu he is now. He will slowly change in time and will no longer be brave and reckless. Finally, it feels like Mozi had a literary sage named Confucius who was more powerful than him? In addition, I feel that it would be a pity if Guan Yu really died like this. After all, he is known as the Martial Saint. After five thousand years of Chinese mythology and legends, how many people dare to call him a saint? Can it be called a saint? Recognized by people?

A good masterpiece of cultivating immortals, "The Immortal's Rebellion" ^O^^O^^O^ A good science fiction masterpiece, "Killing the Abyss" ^O^^O^^O^ A good hit-rate masterpiece, "Fights Break the Sphere" ^O^^O^^O^ A good hard science fiction milestone, "The Three-Body Problem" ^O^^O^^O^ The most persistent writer, the third young master of the Tang family^O^^O^^O^

It's so strenuous and makes me look so awkward.

I thought it was nothing in the past, but now it ruins my outlook on relationships. For example, the two sisters and the mother of the Lan family, the empress and empress of Lan Tian. Then the protagonist, Empress Lantian, and the Lan sisters. There is also the disciple of Empress Lantian. Empress Lan Tian should have a Taoist companion, right? It must be forced to be pressed together with the protagonist to create ambiguity. It feels very awkward to look at now. .

The author Chi Wuming came to visit the masterpiece with his new book [Floating Stories], [url=EFvMne] In the nameless mansion, you can obtain the precept of floating life; you can search for immortals and demons, explore monsters and ask ghosts; you can go up to the sky and see the blue sky and the yellow spring; you can understand the root of the world; you can see the difficulties faced by gods and bodhisattvas, and then you can know the face of your own bodhisattva. Selenium shun

The Online Game of Life and Death, with exquisite writing and an online protagonist's IQ, is recommended by a ten-year-old bookworm. Virtual fairy tales and real science fiction are two intersections. Bookworms who like games, fairy tales, and science fiction can give it a try.

The realm is too confusing and many statements are contradictory.