Rampage Shooting Guard

The book "Rampage Guard" is a very cleverly conceived novel. It can be said to be a piece of rough jade. A very perfect jade, but the most perfect jade also requires careful craftsmanship by the author. However, it seems that the performance of this book was not ideal in the year when it was being crafted. For example, the author's lack of writing skills often resulted in bad sentences, poor words, or awkward sentences. At the same time, the characterization of the characters is relatively thin, and the grasp of various personalities is slightly insufficient. The description of the event is relatively sufficient, but it is only based on the matter, without considering what personality the character should show or what purpose the author should show. I hope that the author will have time to revise the entire book in the future and rewrite and revise it appropriately. I believe this book will become a classic. I suggest you refine a more detailed outline for your next book before writing it. In addition, communicating more with other authors will also be very helpful in improving your writing skills. I believe that if the author writes another book, it will be better than this one.

I heard that the author of this book has passed away... I hope you will still have basketball with you in heaven.

I originally thought this book was quite good, but since the author wants to rely on points to unlock the book, why not calculate the points well? It is obvious that the unlock points have been met long ago, but it has to be delayed. After two games of 30+ points, it has not yet reached 50 points? Please don't sacrifice your brain for water

As for the data flow, you definitely need to make more tables. This book feels like there are too many errors, and the shooting percentage is a bit unreasonable. The season shooting percentage of 60 to 70% is a bit outrageous, and the protagonist will be pulled into slices for study. There are also various areas set by the author that are a headache. Emotional embarrassment, I can't even write this competitive article well, so don't force it.

The agent of the protagonist of the first plug-in in the basketball world is called Zhong Muchen, and he is the author's vest, right?

It's a real deal, it's the number one plug-in in the basketball world that was written quietly to fulfill the author's last wish.

I was reading this book again and found a lot of flaws. Sure enough, it was a book from 10 years ago. The 1+1 contract ended. I played with the Hornets for 2 years. However, the contract ended and I became a free agent. If I went to the Clippers, do you still have to trade? 😅

After looking at the catalog, I have no desire to read further.

Read a few more chapters and give up if it doesn't work. Why does it become more and more confusing the more I write it? There are many stallion novels, but it's not like I can't write them. Now that I have read Chapter 125, I have met several people, and I am interested in each one, but then I don't admit it to the other people. The key is that what I describe is true. What kind of JB person is this? The flag of the archway. This novel is already hundreds of chapters long, so I can't change it even if I give my opinions. In fact, my complaints are useless. The author should have an idea and not be too arbitrary.

I'm wondering if the author wants to come back and write a basketball novel. Qidian's basketball writing has been pretty good lately.

Unblock area map, add one,

It tastes so good, why don't you publish a new book? Such a strong basketball writer, don't waste your talent.

Another book without a system is a waste 😅

Alas, does this author still have a powerful cultivator on campus?

Recommended "Naruto: The Strongest Kai"

Be careful when writing, the calculations were all wrong, it was 82:82 just now, and then after scoring a goal, it became 82:80. Contents in Chapter 122

Author, why haven't you published a new book yet?

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With such a high shooting percentage, can the opponent guard the pick-and-roll shot? Anyway, I have never seen the author write like this.

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The breakup is unclear, chapter 703, and the ending is sloppy, but it's okay in chapter 300.

Looking back, it turned out to be a book I read 10 years ago