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It's not that there's something wrong with your book, it's that I don't appreciate it. It started out fine, but as soon as the heroine appeared, the hero wanted to kiss her for no reason. Later he explained that all the adults wanted to kiss her when they saw her, so why didn't you write about how much the people in the village liked her? Despite being so famous, no one expressed any surprise or surprise when the princess came out, and she followed the hero into the city for no apparent reason. Didn't you inherit any memory? You are an adult. If you see a little girl, you will at most think that she looks cute and will be very beautiful when she grows up. How can you reach the point of risking everything for her so quickly? In addition, the heroine's IQ is written so that it feels completely off-line, and her own situation cannot be seen at all. The male protagonist was bullied by other children and did not fight back, explaining that he likes children, and your body is also a child. Later, it was emphasized that the male protagonist was very childish in the first place, and he didn't notice it at all. Are you sick when you see the princess being cruel and ruthless? One moment he said that human life is like an ant, and the next moment he met the boss lady who was inexplicably in love with the heroine and asked you to do odd jobs? What can you do if you can't hold a bowl with one hand? It's unrealistic. As a child, I don't have the self-consciousness of a child. I look at the world from an adult's perspective, but I feel powerless everywhere. I feel like I can see the generation gap after reading these chapters, and the embarrassing disease has returned. I don't want to complain about writing so much. So, the above is purely my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it.

Can't you recognize me after not seeing each other for 5 years? ? ? ? ? I also know my classmates from elementary school whom I haven't seen in more than 10 years...

The routine is really old... The elder brother is a loser and the younger sister is a genius. In fact, the elder brother is more talented than the younger sister. He doesn't deserve the treatment that a genius deserves... Fantasy will always be like this, everyone around the protagonist is so lucky.

If you can't increase your lifespan at the fifth or sixth level, what's the point of practicing?