Fellow Taoist, Please Stay.

This book about the rebirth of Shen Gongbao is very novel. It makes people want to know what incredible places the prehistoric world will develop in when modern people intervene. It attracts readers' interest in reading to a large extent. However, this novel uses a lot of combination of classical Chinese and modern vernacular, which makes people feel a bit showy. Shen Gongbao's character portrayal The writing is not very good. In short, the writing style of this book is relatively smooth, and the causes and consequences of the story are explained clearly. It is an extraordinary performance for an ordinary author. Although it has shortcomings, it is still a fantasy rebirth novel worth reading in your spare time. I hope the author will work harder in the future 🤭🤭🌹

No, the writing is not good. The protagonist is too useless.

After reading it, I think this book is remarkable. The author's writing skills are quite good. However, the ending is too fast. There are still many holes that have not been filled. There is still room for improvement. Come on, author!

I quite liked it in the beginning, but when I started to invest in the Gods, everything was in chaos. Read the first part as a refreshing novel, and the second part as a sadist. I watched the end of the film about the partition of Buddhism and how it happened. I felt that the protagonist should be awesome, so I watched it. The result, hey.

Why is an 11-year-old novel on my daily guide?

No matter how hard you plan to become a god, Jiejiao 12 Golden Immortals will be hanged and beaten, and the leader of the saint will be dismissed immediately. What will you do? No matter how you plan, the leader of the leader will be dismissed. Why don't you bite him?

Shen Gongbao takes Liuer as his disciple? It existed during the time when Taozu preached. Even if it is a pig, it is better than you Shen Gongbao. Secondly, do you think it is a joke that Taozu's law is not taught to the six ears? This sentence is equivalent to making the six-eared macaque world disgusted, you Shen Gongbao dare to accept him! ! !

I really don't understand how the author wants to write it. On the one hand, he keeps making mistakes in poaching cranes and hunting deer, but on the other hand, he insists on the path of becoming a god. On the one hand, he was full of reluctance after being expelled. What do you want? The plot of wanting to eat deer and crane meat is not reliable. In modern times, it is to protect animals. According to conventional thinking, how could he eat them? It can be seen that the protagonist is not a good person in modern times.

Is there any mistake? Shen Gongbao is a human being from the demon race. Do you think he is a human race? ? ?

Didn't Shen Gongbao like Yunxiao before? Why did he like Su Daji again? Since rescuing Su Daji from the nine-tailed fox, the protagonist has become less and less likable, and the writing has become more and more clumsy. It feels like the two characters were not written by the same person.

I heard that the protagonist of this book was cheated on, is it true?

What are you talking about, the epidemic is free? I flipped through each book one by one, and I still charge VIP fees for this one. Why don't I want to do it in the background?

This book is extremely poisonous! If you are not careful, you will be poisoned to death

As a gift to Nu Shu, I also gave Bi Xiao as a gift. How disgusting.

After reading the first few chapters, I felt that the main character was awesome. After reading a few more chapters, I found that the main character was in love with Ah Ai every day. He was so low-key. It was too classy.

Oh, it made me laugh to death, it turned out to be the ending in the end

Hahaha, Liuer will think highly of you

You wrote the wrong realm. The previous refining and other realms are all mortal realms. Then there is the realm of immortals. There are a lot of realms such as refining the void in the mortal world, which are everywhere. After the heavenly immortals, there are Xuanxian, Jinxian, and then Taiyi Jinxian and Daluo Jinxian.

If you dig a hole but don't fill it, you will get further and further away. Emotional descriptions are childish and disgusting

How many people have been harmed by saying "fellow Taoist, please stay" (￣o￣). Z Z

To celebrate the completion of this book, those who like to read Fengshen novels can read "King Zhou, Spare My Life"

I started to get addicted in Chapter 278. I always like to create an innate treasure by myself. I'm really speechless and can't stand it anymore.

I read this book a long time ago. It's okay. It's a lighthearted and funny novel. I just don't know why there are so many people criticizing it in the book review section.

? Just this book, why do you have the courage to go everywhere in the comment section to recommend this book?

The writing is really rubbish, a bit nauseating.