Evening Talk in the Red Mansion

After reading part of the plot, the author's writing style is indeed good, but it cannot cover up the ugliness of the article's ideas. The Chairman once said that if you don't read Dream of Red Mansions, you won't know what feudal society is. A time traveler who goes to that cannibal society can be poor and lonely. However, after experiencing modern society, seeing people's teeth and land annexation and loan sharking, he may be forced to adapt to the society to make a living. But when he sees a time traveler "fellow", he must immediately recall what is truth, goodness and beauty. The author allows Lin Zhiyuan to escape other people's exploitation through the use of deus ex machina. If he needs to fight, he will have strong inner strength. If he needs to take the imperial examination, he will be talented. If he needs to give gifts, he will be an excellent painter. In this case of deus ex machina, the protagonist's main line of thought is still that I want to work hard to become the ruling class. It can only be said that the author's thoughts are not as good as those of the author who wrote about the dream of a brothel. After all, one is stupid and the other is bad. The stupid one is always better than the bad one.

The story is not bad, but there are many bugs. For example, going from Jinling to Youzhou, you will pass by Yellow Crane Tower along the way, and the last stop in Youzhou is Jingzhou... I feel like I'm going to laugh out loud. Does the author know where Jinling, Jingzhou, and Youzhou are?

The comment section said that this article cannot withstand scrutiny, which is indeed true. I just saw Chapter 2 and there are all kinds of bugs. Since Lin Ruhai knew that the Jia family had killed her unborn child, she still sent this one alive. You don't know what your daughter's character is? Sending an innocent little rabbit to a wolf den with a group of old wolves inside, a fool can predict the outcome. Is this because he is afraid that Lin Daiyu will not die quickly enough? Is there something wrong with Lin Ruhai's brain? Furthermore, even if Mrs. Wang has a grudge with Jia Min, it is not a mortal enemy. Jia Min is already married. If you reach out so far to harm the child in Jia Min's belly, what will you get if you succeed? For the Lin family property? Don't be ridiculous, how likely is this? Although it seems that the Jia family embezzled a lot of Lin family property in Dream of Red Mansions, how much is it? Lin Ruhai is not a fool! Mrs. Wang never thought about what if she failed? There must be a hole in this head.

I would like to ask if there are any novels about traveling through time or being reborn in the Red Mansion to fight for world hegemony?

This is a female channel novel, my words are really poisonous

I couldn't stand it anymore when I saw that Xiangyun and Baochai, whom I like, were described in such a bad way. This is all nonsense, it has changed the character's personality beyond all recognition!

This Lin Daiyu is really too cute and annoying to watch. She doesn't have any intelligence at all.

When it comes to writing about Dream of Red Mansions, this is my favorite book. I feel that the angle it touches on Dream of Red Mansions is very good, and it has less impact on the original feeling of Dream of Red Mansions.

I've been so poisoned that it makes sense to forcefully change the character's personality for the sake of the plot? What do you mean this is fan fiction after all? Author Do you know what fan fiction is? Fan fiction usually follows the settings and worldview of the original characters, and real fans have higher requirements. If you look at Japanese works, the FATE series or the side stories of the JOJO series, they are all required to follow the original settings - FA and others are called scumbags by many fans because their plots and worldviews are inconsistent with the original settings. For the sake of the plot, various forcible cheats or forced intelligence are required. On the other hand, works like Mo Yi perfectly restore the world view of the original work, and also add their own settings, which makes them popular and continues to produce comics and animations.

After reading more than forty chapters, let me share my thoughts: I feel that the author's writing style is pretty good. There are no big mistakes except for some typos, but there are also some problems. First, there are too many inexplicable characters, such as domestic slaves, maids, relatives and children created out of thin air, unknown scholars, officials, and nobles... I don't see any actual effect of these people on the plot. How can a passerby know the word count? Second, the protagonist has too few scenes and too many side descriptions. Immediately following the first question, the insignificant supporting characters are much less important than the protagonist. It is not impossible to write supporting characters or profile descriptions, but the premise is that your protagonist and the main plot must be prominent. Otherwise, it is putting the cart before the horse and traveling through the Red Mansions. What you are looking at is development and hegemony or love stories, rather than three aunts and six wives. Which servant was punished? What happened to so-and-so's relative? Is it related to the main plot?

I can finally see that Daiyu is no longer Daiyu! It's the same as other famous ladies. Without her own characteristics, the story is very good, but since the temperament of the original character cannot be maintained, there is no need to write a fanfic. The same goes for writing an alternate history?

Why are there so many negative reviews? The writing is obviously very good! A novel with a strong Red Mansion flavor. It's just that this work doesn't cater to the audience, and it's not a good read. If you are tired of reading the "Beautiful House" fanfic, you can read this one. Although it is not a perfect novel, it is indeed worth reading!

Only when I looked at the back did I realize it was a female author, no wonder

The writing style is vulgar and the realm is vulgar.

It's really not human to have murderous intentions when meeting a time-traveling female compatriot. Abandon the book decisively.

This is a book I can read completely

After watching it for a long time, it turned out to be a female channel. In the end, I married for five chapters without getting a male lead. The brother wrote it from beginning to end, but in the end he didn't get the younger sister. So disgusting

Is it my imagination... Why is the protagonist almost like a soy sauce party... His role is not as good as Jia Zheng...

When reading at Qidian, I rarely read books written in this way. However, there is too much space written about Lin Daiyu, and it turns out to be a female channel novel. No wonder.

It's too poisonous. The subsequent attempt to darken Shi Xiangyun is really adding more poison to the poison.

I am very curious whether the author knows that in literature such as A Dream of Red Mansions and Water Margin, there are clearly immortals and monks in them. Jia Baoyu and Lin Daiyu were reincarnated on earth with the mission of reducing and seeking space.

This novel is not enjoyable to read. Lin Daiyu is a burden. She actively or passively brings troubles and comes back for the protagonist to solve and deal with the aftermath. The length of the protagonist is far less than that of Lin Daiyu. It can be said that the protagonist of this novel is Lin Daiyu. The troubles are described in a large space and the male protagonist solves the troubles in a small space.

The author's geography and history were taught by the biology teacher, right?

This book is very well written. I read it three times. The first time I read it was five years ago. But there is one thing in particular that is hard to let go of, that is Zicuckoo! I like her very much, and she has always been loyal to Daiyu in the original work. I didn't even think about being Baoyu's little wife in this book, which is really super irritating. I really want to see the story where Zijuan has been supporting Daiyu and both of them are happy in the end 😭

What is the essence of Red Mansions? It is the story of Twelve Hairpins and a group of young ladies. Men like this, YY thousands of reds in the same cave, can't grasp the center , female readers are also lustful, there are no high-quality original characters worthy of their YY in Red Mansions, I think there are not many women who watch Red Mansions, Liangliang is normal!

Has the name of this book been changed? I remember it was not called by this name before.

It looked like such a mess. He was trying such an important thing, but he just brushed it off. He kept talking about staying away from Jia's house all day long, and even caught up with him from time to time. I couldn't understand that since he didn't want to help, he shouldn't be dragging his feet.

I just saw a double wear, I was a little surprised

This book is full of Red Mansion flavor, like a female pornographic novel, but there are too many bugs. The Red Mansion flavor is much stronger than those books with the Red Mansion cover.

Daiyu didn't marry the male protagonist? How dare you continue watching this?