Reverse Sui Dynasty

Rubbish, rubbish, rubbish, is the author as naive as the protagonist?

That. Ask weakly. Were they sent every day 10 years ago? Point. Coin. Why does this book have hundreds of thousands of fans?

*, The author wants to engage in tourism? It just makes me laugh to death. . . . .

Is this protagonist useless in the middle stage? If you write according to historical data, that's fine, but you have to make changes. What's the difference if the time traveler comes and can't follow? Just Luo Yi, who made some money, and then planned to write everything according to the history of the Sui Dynasty, and finally imitated Li Shimin and ended with a climax?

It's so poisonous and the character of the protagonist is hard to describe in one sentence.

According to the standards of more than ten years ago, the writing should be pretty good. Unfortunately, I am reading it now and I really can't stand it. There are all kinds of logical loopholes in the beginning, especially the two maids who dared to leave the sick young master alone in the house and the master of the house. When the mistress was hiding it, she told the young master that you were suffering from hysteria. She usually spoke unabashedly, saying that (for someone with amnesia and hysteria) the young master is so strange. If you make any of these mistakes, you will die, but these two people can be fooled into being Dugu Jialuo's confidant.

Very average, novice writing level

After reading dozens of chapters, the storyline is reasonable, but the writing style is too childish...

A very admirable dynasty. Sui Dynasty. The book is a good book

Just write about Yuchi Fanchi's death. In troubled times, why is it so important to write about women?

It's okay, but the system is a bit poor. It seems that there is no clear distinction between government agencies, taxation, police, courts, and cabinet. Technology must at least develop electricity, glass, and gunpowder. If you use dim sum in fifty years, you can at least reach the technology of the Republic of China. The emperor system is also bad. Let the government affairs go. The emperors of all dynasties can supervise all officials and control part of the army. The prince has the right to develop and found the country. It will definitely snowball and let China sweep the world.

I am very interested in the Sui Dynasty recently, and the author's writing is to my taste.

The preface is incorrect and the postscript is incorrect. Has the author carefully reviewed your work?

It's really not that good. I don't feel like it's written.

The article is not on topic, bad review. . .