Star Wars

It was very well written, but I suddenly stopped updating it that year.

Weiyang, why didn't you write "Throne of Violence"? ! !

Do you have any recommendations for novels of the same type? Need better writing

Analysis of the novel "God of War" Overall evaluation This is an online novel that combines elements of interstellar science fiction and oriental fantasy/martial arts. It has a grand setting and a complete world view. The author has found a good balance between "technological civilization" and "superpower training". It includes science fiction elements such as star battleships, virtual networks, and genetic enhancement, as well as traditional training systems such as the Force, telekinesis, and martial arts skills, forming a unique "scientific and military training" style. Core Highlights 1. The world setting is solid · The environment of Mars Steel Cave, Earth, and Spaceport is described in detail and has a sense of substitution · The energy system of dark energy, the Force, and telekinesis is logically self-consistent, and the numerical system is clear (Force Index, Telekinesis Hertz) · The nine major series of superpowers (flames, storms, frost, titanium, creatures, gravity, electromagnetism, strong core, weak strings) are completely set and have their own characteristics · The three-level and nine-level hierarchy is clear, and the training path is clear 2. The protagonist's ability design is distinctive · Dual cultivation of original thoughts: practicing the force and telekinesis at the same time, the dual identity brings tension to the story · Perfect copy: watch the battle video to copy other people's martial arts experience, which is an innovative golden finger setting · Moment of stillness: 24 hours of non-stop training, explaining the protagonist's extremely fast training speed · Star core: the mysterious treasure underground of the Emerald Star, which brings about the mutation of the force star vortex, paving the way for the follow-up "Four Ultimate Divine Way" 3. Character creation is remarkable · Xin Lie: grew up from an ordinary boy to a powerful genius, with a calm and low-key character, who has his own opinions and does not follow blindly · George: a talkative super warlock, responsible for enlivening the atmosphere and providing technical support · Zhai Haixi: an iceberg beauty, a martial arts idiot, in contrast to Xin Lie · Long Aotian: a familiar cheeky character, the name itself is a joke · Luo Zhengfeng: Mentor-type character, level 6 titanium warrior, helpful to Xin Lieduo · Ling Bingyu: Superstar + level 6 warlock who appeared in the later stage, the setting is impactful 4. Grasp the rhythm of the plot · Military academy chapter: admission, training, team formation, Emerald star mission → Classic academy flow structure · Emerald star chapter: discovery of dark matter mine, battle with jackal beast, acquisition of star core → Plot climax · Purple Moon Star Chapter: Fighting competition, assassination incident, getting to know Ling Bingyu → World view expansion 5. The military atmosphere is created in place · The military school system, military rank system, and battleship settings are well documented · Team combat, airborne exercises, and the Emerald Star killing mission → Combination of training and actual combat · The military's presence and power are realistically depicted Points for improvement 1. Insufficient character arcs · Xin Lie's character changes are not obvious, and the journey is smooth, lacking real setbacks · The supporting characters are slightly instrumental, and George, Long Aotian, Zhai Haixi, etc. Lack independent story lines · The villain Yunzhong Martial Arts School lacks in-depth characterization in addition to being arrogant and domineering 2. The emotional line is weak · The ambiguous description with Zhai Haixi and Ling Bingyu is too obscure · The emotional line between Du Yunfei and Rebecca ends abruptly · Lack of heart-warming emotional breaking point 3. The power system expands too fast · The protagonist goes from ordinary people to the fourth level peak in two years, and the later expansion of combat power is difficult to control · "The fourth-level samurai kills the sixth-level samurai" is explained by the cooperation between boxers and warlocks, but it is still reluctant · The setting of the ninth-level samurai is too far away and lacks an intermediate level of threat 4. Some settings are unclear · The source of Xin Lie's copying ability (electromagnetic radiation) is mentioned in one sentence, which is not convincing enough · The origin and nature of the star core lacks explanation · Vanke Federation, Iron Chain and other forces are not closely related to the main plot Continued: After Purple Moon Star --- Chapter 32 Undercurrent The night sky of Purple Moon Star is shrouded in a hazy purple halo, and the figures of Xin Lie and Ling Bingyu glide silently in mid-air and go back separately. Back in the hotel room, Xin Lie took off his sunglasses and stood quietly by the window for a moment, looking at the looming hexagonal frost logo on the top of the Ling's Building in the distance, with a lot of thoughts in his heart. "Level 6 peak warlock... A strong contender for the fourth evocation warlock in the country..." Xin Lie whispered to himself. He originally thought that he was already the top among his peers, but the appearance of Ling Bingyu made him realize that there are always people who are ahead in this world. A seventy-year-old sixth-level peak warlock, the frequency of his telepathy is as high as tens of millions of Hertz, which means—— If Ling Bingyu is willing, everything within a radius of one hundred kilometers is under her control. Ninety-nine percent of the people on Ziyue Star were like ants in front of her. "It's not enough." Xin Lie clenched his fists, "I need stronger power." He entered a state of tranquility, and his mind sank into the star vortex. At this time, there are still nearly 300,000 points of storm force in the star spiral, which are transformed and absorbed at a rate of 5,000 points per day under the operation of the "Bipolar Ultimate Divine Way" mental method. According to this progress, in twenty days he will have more than 250,000 points of flame force, which is only one step away from the upper limit of 300,000 points for a fourth-level warrior. As for telepathy, it has now exceeded 60,000 Hz, and a telepathy field with a radius of 600 meters can be constructed outside the body. "After the star vortex overflows, it is time to open up the latitude of the Force." Xin Lie recalled the content in the Super Energy Center's information, "Ninety-six latitudes, 1,152 Force nodes... That is the real watershed for the psychic warrior." At this moment, his optical brain suddenly vibrated - an encrypted message. Sender: Luo Zhengfeng. "Xin Lie, come to my room tomorrow morning. We have something important to discuss." Xin Lie frowned slightly. Luo Zhengfeng rarely contacted him late at night, so something important must have happened. He replied with the word "yes", gathered his mind and continued to practice. --- Chapter 33 Military Secret Order The next morning, Xin Lie knocked on Luo Zhengfeng's door on time. The door opened and he saw that in addition to Luo Zhengfeng, there were Joanna and three other sixth-level peak warriors in the room. Seven people sat in a circle, all with solemn expressions, and the air was filled with tension. "Sir." Xin Lie saluted. "Come in and close the door." Luo Zhengfeng waved. Xin Lie sat down as instructed and glanced at everyone present. These five sixth-level peak warriors, plus a fourth-level warrior myself, make this a luxurious lineup, which shows that what is being discussed is no small matter. Luo Zhengfeng wiped his hands on the table, and a holographic projection appeared in the center of the room - it was a dark red planet, with a surface covered with crisscrossing rift valleys and mountains. There was no ocean, no vegetation, and it was dead and desolate. "This is it?" Xin Lie asked. "Iron Sand Star." Joanna took over, her voice as clear as ice, "It is located on the edge of the Pleiades star region, three hundred and twenty light years away from the Purple Moon Star. The surface temperature is minus forty degrees, and the atmosphere is thin. The main components are carbon dioxide and nitrogen, no oxygen, and no liquid water. The entire planet is rich in heavy metal minerals such as iron, nickel, and cobalt. It has been discovered by the Ling Consortium for more than twenty years and has been secretly mined." Xin Lie felt a chill in his heart. Ling's consortium - another Ling Bingyu's industry. Luo Zhengfeng said in a deep voice: "Three hours ago, the military intercepted an encrypted communication. The intelligence showed that a core stronghold of the Iron Chain Killer Organization is hidden deep in the planet." "Iron Chain!" Xin Lie lost his voice. "That's right." Luo Zhengfeng nodded, "In recent years, Iron Chain has embezzled three transport ore ships of the Ling's Consortium through illegal means and intercepted a large amount of dark matter minerals, part of which is stored in the Iron Sand Star stronghold. The Ling's Consortium has suffered heavy losses, but has never made any announcement. Now the military has decided to take action, killing two birds with one stone - not only destroying the Iron Chain stronghold, but also recovering the plundered dark matter." The thoughts in Xin Lie's mind were racing, and he understood many things in an instant. No wonder Ling Bingyu said last night that "it takes several years of planning" to deal with Iron Chain. It turned out that she had already mastered the location of Iron Chain's stronghold and was just waiting for the opportunity. When Luo Zhengfeng summoned everyone at this moment, it was obvious that even the top military officials couldn't sit still - dark matter is a national strategic resource, and iron chains are openly snatching it away, which has already crossed a red line. "Action plan?" Xin Lie asked. "The fleet will dispatch twelve planet-class cruisers from the lunar base, with Lieutenant General Cao Xu personally in charge, and will set off from the solar system in three days." Luo Zhengfeng assigned the tasks one by one. "We, as the advance team, will set off from Ziyue Star today, take the Mo Yang directly to the periphery of Iron Sand Star, and wait for the arrival of the main force to lurk inside and outside." Xin Lie was shocked. Cao Xu—eighth-level flame warrior, commander of the Seventh Fleet—takes action personally! It seems that the military's determination is far greater than imagined. "Xin Lie." Luo Zhengfeng looked at him, "Your injury?" "Half of your body has recovered and you can fight." Xin Lie answered without hesitation. In fact, his storm force transformation was only one third of the way, and his combat effectiveness was indeed reduced. But with the hardened platinum fist armor in hand, and Ling Bingyu, who was at the peak of level six, also on the move, he didn't want to miss this actual battle. "Okay." Luo Zhengfeng nodded, "Get ready and set off in two hours." --- Chapter 34 Iron Sand Abyss Six days later, the Mo Yang cruiser quietly entered the outer edge of the Iron Sand Galaxy. Looking from the observation window of the bridge, the Iron Sand Star is like a dried blood bead, hanging in the dark space, with no satellites or star rings around it, lonely and cold. Xin Lie stood beside Ling Bingyu. The two of them turned on telekinesis at the same time and communicated silently in the bridge. "Did you already know that the military would take action?" Xin Lie asked using telepathy. "It took three years of planning." Ling Bingyu's eyes were calm, "I deliberately leaked the information about the iron sand star stronghold to the military. The Ling Consortium does not have enough force to take it away. Instead of continuing to be sucked by the iron chain, it is better to borrow the military's knife." "So you asked me for help yesterday... Just for convenience?" Ling Bingyu shook his head slightly, "No. Those words are sincere, we are friends. The iron chain is just our common goal." Xin Lie stared at her for a moment and nodded. At this time, the whole ship's radio sounded: "Attention, everyone, enter the first level of combat readiness. The advance team will be airborne on the surface of Iron Sand Star in 30 minutes. The target is the east entrance of the underground stronghold. I wish you all good luck." Our mission is to contain Lieutenant General Cao Xu before encircling him." Xin Lie paused, "Level 6 Peak?" "That's right." Ling Bingyu's voice was as calm as a mirror, "But I will deal with him." --- On the surface of Iron Sand Star, the cold wind of forty degrees below zero was carrying red dust, and the visibility was less than a hundred meters. Xin Lie jumped out of the airborne capsule and stirred up a cloud of dust when his feet landed on the ground. He looked around and saw that Luo Zhengfeng, Joanna and other five sixth-level peak warriors were already in place, scattered within a three-kilometer radius from the east entrance of the stronghold, forming an encirclement. "Underground energy reaction detected, depth - three hundred meters." Luo Zhengfeng's voice came from the communication channel, "The internal structure of the stronghold is complex, with at least three layers of defense system. Xin Lie, you will be among the first to enter with me." "Yes." The two flew towards an alloy door disguised as a rock. Luo Zhengfeng pressed his hands on the door, and the titanium force surged out - the whole door sunk inward like paper and collapsed. Behind the door is a metal tunnel extending downward, about five meters wide, with a dark red emergency light every ten meters on both sides, illuminating the passage like an abyss leading to hell. "Let's go." Luo Zhengfeng was in front, Xin Lie was behind, and the two of them sprinted downwards quickly. At the end of the corridor was a heavy explosion-proof door, but Luo Zhengfeng punched it open with overwhelming force. Behind the door is a huge underground space - a rotunda with a diameter of more than 500 meters. The dome is nearly 100 meters high. Countless thick metal supports are intertwined like a spider web. Dozens of mining equipment are running, making a low roar. In the center of the hall, a middle-aged man wearing black clothes stood with his hands behind his back, his eyes as sharp as an eagle. "Luo Zhengfeng, level six titanium warrior." The man spoke with a hoarse voice, "I have admired you for a long time." "Iron chain, the peak of level six." Luo Zhengfeng sneered, "No wonder I dare to take root on the iron sand star. I thought I was so capable. It turned out to be just a man. " The iron chain remained unmoved, "You have helpers, and so do I." As soon as he finished speaking, seven figures walked out of the shadows around the hall—two fifth-level warriors and five fourth-level warriors, all of them powerful and murderous. Xin Lie took a deep breath, hardened platinum fist armor covered his palms, and red flames rose from under his skin. The battle is about to break out. ---