Inheritance Base

The writing is too streamlined, for example: After sitting down, Han Wenzheng asked: "Are you the clan leader?" "Yes, I am the seventh clan leader of the Yanhuang clan. You may have heard of my name. My surname is Gongsun and my name is Xuanyuan." Upon hearing this name, Han Wenzheng immediately jumped up: "Shut up, who are you? You dare to pretend to be the Holy Emperor of the Chinese nation. Watch your moves." He punched out. It feels like it's just a general introduction to a certain scene, written like an expository essay, and the scene is too unvivid. I suggest you read more truly excellent novels and learn more.

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For example, geographical issues: 1. The original problem of the Yanhuang civilization development zone. First of all, is the earth in the book the real earth? Apart from the Yanhuang tribe, are there no other races on the earth? If there is, the question arises. They are all people from Earth. Why don't other races help the Yanhuang tribe fight against the Wolf tribe? Secondly, since the Yanhuang tribe has reached the level of interstellar war, why has it not yet developed an interstellar colony? Even a space station should have one. Therefore, it is very surprising to say that the Yanhuang tribe was wiped out by the group. 2. The problem of the Wolf tribe's civilization development zone. Same as above, the development of the Wolf tribe's civilization not only involves the motivation of war, but also involves comparison with the civilization of the Yanhuang tribe. In addition, if you are unhappy, you will be destroyed. This kind of thinking probably has no market at the starting point. 3. Geographical issues of the new Yanhuang base. This is what I am more concerned about. First of all, the work says that the Yanhuang tribe has been exterminated and cannot be exterminated again. But in today's globalized world, even the Antarctic and the Arctic have human footprints. Can it be understood that all living things on the earth have died? According to the description in the book, if the Wolf clan's nuclear bombs are dropped, the surface of the earth will be basically comparable to the moon and will not be suitable for human survival. However, the book does not explain where the Yanhuang base is on the planet. 4. Geographical issues in heaven Where is heaven? If it's a fantasy novel, you can say it's in the sky, but when it comes to galactic wars in outer space, it's very weird. There can be two explanations for this. The first one is that the so-called heaven is another galaxy civilization, and the immortals are just the early immigrants of the Yanhuang tribe on the earth. However, this feels like the main mine and branch mine in the game of Warcraft. The branch base was copied and another branch mine was opened. The second type, the so-called heaven, is another plane world, but this has more problems. For example, does the heaven need the power of faith in the human world? How do immortals travel from the high plane to the low plane, and how do humans travel to the high plane?

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