Midfielder

It's hard to imagine that this book was written by a woman. To be honest, I didn't pay attention to the author ID at all when reading this book. I don't pay much attention to other books except "The Beacon Fire" and "The Princes". When I saw the author's words in Chapter 99, I discovered that my God, she is a female author.

17 Years old is perfect, 15 years old is the biggest failure

To be honest, I only found out that the author is a woman. I can only say that the aesthetics of men and women are very different. The heroine has to be Selena Gomez, interspersed with Emma Watson. I don't know where these two are. One looks like she has plastic surgery on her double eyelids, and her whole face is typical of a Barbie doll. The other has grown up and become disabled.

Ha? Female author, wow! It's unimaginable that there is a female author writing about football, I admire her! ! !

Selena Gomez is too ugly😫

Entering the first team at the age of 15 is too young. The author knows that readers will definitely not accept it, but you still write like this. Don't complain if your results are not ideal. There are reasons for this.

The biggest failure of this novel is that the game has no visual sense. If it were described in a commentary way, I think I would continue to follow it.

For sports and competitive novels, there are too few descriptions of the game scene, almost none, and there is no passion in reading. Most of them are psychological profiles like running accounts. This is a failure. Write more about game scenes, even live commentary and audience reactions. Write less intrigue, so it will look better.

The writing style is delicate, but the problem is that as a sports novel, this book lacks explosive points. The passion of the game is deeply embedded in the descriptions of the hearts of all parties... Football novels can be written simpler.

Even if you become famous at a young age, these pig's feet are too small. After 15, you will be a gorilla.

No title is simply the biggest failure

When I saw that the heroine looked like Selena Gomez, I immediately didn't want to watch it anymore.

How can I put it, they are all kinds of psychological drama, and the sports on the field are not as good as a few words from the supporting actors.

Poisonous? A love-hate relationship with the national team?

Why do you feel that the main character is married to Mu Niao?

The description of the game could be a little simplified, or a little more interesting. I have only read more than 50 chapters. The chapters of the competition are basically turned over. Because it's all in one long paragraph and a bit boring. And about the description of the game, even if it is written so much, there is always no sense of picture. I wonder if you can understand what I mean? I have read several other football articles, some of which write a lot about the game, but I can roughly imagine what it is like. But this book's description of the game, let alone the sense of immersion, can't imagine the scene at all, so I want to skip reading it.

This book is more like a biography, describing the growth process of the protagonist and the people around him, with some major events and important competitions that are important points in the protagonist's life mixed in. Although it is written about competition, there are not many live broadcast chapters about competition.

The main character's age is the biggest drawback. .

Why was there no mention of the Portuguese Cup and Portuguese Super Cup when the protagonist was in Portugal?

The heroine might as well just straight up Kristen Stewart! No need to change your age!