Chaos Traveling Through Another World

If the Book of Chaos really contains the knowledge of the cultivation series, it should not only contain the knowledge of the cultivation series. Chaos contains the essence of all worlds, and the knowledge in it should not only contain the unique cultivation system of the East, but should include all kinds of strange systems.

If the protagonist's name is revealed at the beginning and then changed, it will be very uncomfortable and make you feel like you can't stand it. On the contrary, if it is not revealed, just pick any name and it will be acceptable😊

When the author writes a book in the future, I suggest you change his pen name to Ma Xteng's father or something else. Because your pen name is now obsolete, I have never seen anyone as completely ignorant of numbers as you.

I miss it so much. This was an online novel I read when I was in junior high school. Now I have graduated from college.

Author, I'm sorry, I still can't hold on anymore. After reading more than ten chapters, I think you can take a look at what you wrote. Can you stand it? There are a lot of typos, and there are others I won't mention. Just go and see for yourself, 88

It's already confusing after only a few dozen chapters. I was able to teleport ten miles when I was just in the Nascent Soul stage. Later, when my skills improved, is it true that I can only teleport one kilometer?

To be honest, it is so vulgar to see the protagonist jumping off the cliff with his sister and encountering a strange encounter! I just want to ask, in a few hundred years, no one will slip and jump? Didn't jump down when being chased? Were you not forced to jump down? I don't think anyone will jump from here in billions of years. They will be waiting for the protagonist.

It's been more than 20 chapters and the protagonist is still playing single-player. Is it interesting to write like this? What kind of protagonist do I want to end this single-player life?

There is nothing wrong with the subject matter, but the writing style is childish 😅

Inhumane! His parents died and he smiled happily! Another addition to the army of orphans ^O^

I originally added it to the bookshelf after reading the introduction, but after seeing the post in the comment area, I gave up decisively.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I felt like vomiting. I wrote a lot of nonsense about what should be written and what shouldn't be written. The novel is not written smoothly at all, and 9 out of 10 sentences are nonsense.

Hold on until 20. I really can't stand it anymore.

I have a sister, I have artifacts and techniques, my parents are both dead, not bad, not bad.