X Yilong Era

From the beginning of Pangu Ax, it relied on the defense

Lao Yun's writing is really sorry for the early stage of the book. This beginning is the most touching one I have ever written, if not the first. In the third golden chapter, the gods start and Tianhu starts. As a result, he was beaten to pieces by Lao Yun... Ten years later, we still remember each other and shed blood for each other.

When I watched it before, I was completely amazed at the beginning.

I came from watching anime, and the novels were always exciting until Pangu. I realized that this was not the Dragon Age I thought, and gradually I became disappointed. The real Dragon Age should not include Pangu, Nuwa, Taishang Laojun, and Heaven-shaking Seal. Just fighting with dragons, upgrading to improve strength and the memory of the hero's previous life are enough. Let me ask the author, is this the Dragon Age for you without regrets? Is this the puzzling world you expect? At least I believe not, if I had just started reading this book I would not have read it. I may just say this to give some comfort to the regrets in my heart. Keep up the good work, author, and try your best not to let regrets appear again.

I read the Dragon Age comic when I was in primary school. It was really amazing. I didn't even know about Fighting to Break the Sphere at that time (I was a kid), but unfortunately I couldn't read it after seeing the plot of finding Mingxuan (where would a kid get the money to read a book). Now that I think about it, I can fulfill this childhood wish, but... Why did the writing fall apart 😭 It's heartbreaking, it's really heartbreaking! I really want to find Lao Yun and ask him to rewrite it 😭

If you see the content of Pangu Ax in this book, you should stop subscribing and read the comics. The content after Pangu Ax is not worth subscribing to. Advice from a student party member who overdrawn their breakfast money.

The comics of X-Dragon Age are based on meeting the Lord of Amethyst City again. The first half is like a god, and the second half is like a ghost. It's not the same style at all, which is very heartbreaking.

I saw it a long time ago, but it didn't work well after Pangu Ax was released.

When you see The Sky Axe, you can abandon the book so that you can still retain your beautiful fantasy. If you continue to read it, you will become more and more disappointed. Taking the Sky Axe as the boundary, before the introduction of the artifact, the combat power of this world was still dominated by dragons, which were compared with the strength of the dragon's ability; after the introduction of the artifact, the protagonist is directly invincible with the artifact, and the dragon has become an irrelevant foil.

When I first read this novel, I was amazed and beautiful. It can be said to be a very good novel. But after reading it, I felt regretful and disappointed. Before the Artifact and After the Artifact are two novels. Not only that, there are problems with many details. Let me tell you what I found that made me uncomfortable: 1. Xin Yun at the Yibao Conference said that when she grows up, she will give Yiluo the most beautiful thing that suits her best. The hairpin (worn in the previous life) disappeared at all later. It was obvious that this was not a kid's joke, but a lifelong vow 2 The first time Yiluo called Yan Qingqing Yanzi, Xin Yun reprimanded her. Yiluo also apologized for her rudeness. Yan Qingqing was moved because it was an equal partner attitude towards her. But in the later stage, not only Yiluo but also Xin Yun also called him Yanzi, sweat! 3. Lan Se arranged for him to be his girlfriend in the previous life, but in the article he only introduced Po Kong. This is unreasonable. In the later period, it was as if he never existed. In the middle period, he said that he was invincible at the headquarters, and more or less diamond-level masters could do it. In the later period, she was not included in team battles. Even the water given to Xin Yun became extremely cold but did not freeze. It has also been deleted. It can be said that Lan Se is really a very big regret, whether it is the previous life or this life... In the comics, she said "If there is an afterlife, don't love me, don't look for me" is really artistic. Coupled with the extreme despair, and the setting of only having feelings for Xin Yun, it is sad, helpless, regretful... Really The author forgot about her and my heart broke. I really like such an innocent character 4 The early stage has been foreshadowing, Xin Yun was reborn to explore the reason why the nine masters fought in the melee of Tianhun and Earthly Darkness, but later he did not bury it 5 The Donghuang Bell that has been buried has no ending 6 The most important point is that it ended hastily, leaving a confusing ending. Yiluo is still light, and there is no ending, leaving Xin Yun to become a semi-saint, but it is gone... I think the author made Xin Yun grow to be the strongest, but ended it hastily Summary: If the foreshadowing is not buried, it will always be a pit, and the forgetting of the setting is doomed to the decline of the novel. How can people read a novel that cannot even be based on what the author said? The author's perfunctory approach in the later period was the biggest reason why the novel ended unfinished. Even the addition of the artifact setting would not have made the novel unfinished like this. In the later period, the pace obviously accelerated, and I felt like I had given up on the book.

Really, can you rewrite this book in the later stage? What a good idea. The later stage of this book has really made me confused since I was a child. I can read it over and over again ten times in the early stage, but it is really true in the later stage.,,,,,😭😭😭

Brothers, it doesn't matter if you think the ending is not good. There is also a second part, Dragon Age: The Peerless Dragon Rider. The ending is satisfactory 👍🤓 Although it is not written by the same person, it is perfectly connected. It is great.

I'm confused why no one writes Dragon Age fanfics?

Alas, it was the only book I read all the time except eating and sleeping. When I saw there was a competition in that academy, I couldn't stand it anymore, and then I skipped many chapters to the finale. Really, the first hundred or so chapters are enough to become a god, but it's a pity, it's a pity, with four kings, two, four, and four kings. You fucked me up, it's so outrageous. What a shame. The previous one still looks classic today.

Rewrite it, this subject should be popular now.

It's a book I miss very much. It's so well written, but the author is only lv3. If it's not platinum, it's at least a master level.

I don't make any magical weapons, I just keep fighting monsters with the heroine on a daily basis to gain experience. This book is definitely going to be a hit.

The early stage is really strong. This book is such a pity. I still remember the plot of going inside and eating moss after so many years. I came to Qidian to look for it on a whim today. It also made me know that there is a comic version. I hope the comic version will be better.

I read it a long time ago. I remember staying up all night with my phone in hand to read it. It had an amazing setting and an amazing beginning. I liked the chapter about the bloodshed the most. Unfortunately, it collapsed again and again after Pangu Ax came out. I read them all. The finale chapter was a bit disappointing. In fact, it was good that the protagonist kept fighting monsters and upgrading. But after the setting like the prehistoric era came out, I felt that it no longer had that amazing feeling. If there was no setting like the prehistoric era, I think the quality of this book would be better, but it is a pity that it is a good novel...

When I saw Pangu Ax, the worldview of the novel was shattered, and the author's explanations were too rich (I feel that every author has to pull out characters from the ancient times, so that the novel is perfect) A vague figure stood in the void, and broke the place with a punch, mixed up, floated, and sank. I don't know how long it took for the glory of all things to be formed. The world was first formed, and there was a roar. It was about to return to nothingness, and the figure was blurred. One foot stepped on the ground, one hand held up the sky, and the vast mist formed.)

It has been more than ten years since I found you and finished reading it. Although it was different from what I expected, I still thank you for giving me an explanation for my childhood.

I have only seen the animated version of it, which is very beautiful and shocking. I am wondering if I should waste time filling in the rest of the content with novels. Please give me some advice.

Some emotions, I remember this is a book that my classmate told me during a chat, memory, and the scene where he talked about eating moss to survive. I remember that he was talking and drawing on the paper with a pen in his hand. At first I didn't take it seriously. After all, it was just an occasional chat. Then I forgot whether I bought the paper book from the street stall or another classmate. I got a small copy with several pages in my hand. After reading the beginning, my memory was evoked. It had been a long time since the classmate introduced it last time. He had forgotten it. I had also forgotten it at first. But at the beginning, the protagonist and the heroine were trapped in a well eating moss, and at the end the protagonist fed the heroine blood. All these echoed with what my classmates told me, which gave me a wonderful feeling that an accident could actually be related to the present. At that time, I was immersed in the world of this novel. The competition to sell things, a blue gem that improved my qualifications, another heroine with a spider dragon, and the relationship between the protagonist and the heroine all made me feel excited. It seemed to be winter at that time. I was sitting at the door of the back row. The cold wind outside made my fingers stiff. I was flipping through the thin paper and immersed in the world of adventure. To this day, I can still recall the scene at that time. The relationship between me and this book originated from coincidence, and ended with the missing sequel. I couldn't finish watching him, just like I didn't meet that classmate after graduation.

I read it when I was in junior high school. I remember he also had other books.

The memories between us All collected carefully I always cry secretly Like a tired bird that has lost its return date

This book is really enjoyable at the beginning, but really unsatisfactory at the end. Every time I think about the previous part, I will have the urge to read it again, and then I can't help but give up the book once I finish reading the previous part. Some book friends summed it up well. It is only recommended to read the book before Sky Axe. Before and after Sky Axe are not the same feeling at all. I couldn't stand it this time after seeing the story of Recruiting the God of Killing Luo Fu. I hope I can stick to it until I finish reading it next time.

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Why are all the reviews for a book written in 2009 written 20 years later? It's obviously more than ten years apart. I'm curious.

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