Starting from the Spell Wheel: I Am Really Not Rime!

The dual protagonists are well written. Is the entire Qidian. Com basic? You mean you can do it?

In fact, the book is okay, up to Chapter 15, it's pretty good. The effect of the latest 16 chapters depends on the subsequent development. The only problem is the "double protagonist" problem. This is basically the only problem that has been officially revealed and may be considered huge. Firstly, this character greatly affects the perception of reading. For ordinary readers, it often takes a day or even two days to see the main character. This is somewhat unreasonable and difficult to maintain the enthusiasm of readers. Secondly, this female character is an avid fan of Gojo Satoru, but the reader is acting as the protagonist. Gojo Satoru will even be subconsciously regarded as a potential enemy by some people. Writing such a female character in a large area and in combination with the rhythm of reading will greatly dampen the enthusiasm of readers. Therefore, it would be more appropriate to change this role to a role that purely promotes plot development. Combined with the fact that this character already has a relatively vivid portrayal, such a good development, then it only needs to use half a chapter to a chapter to tell the story of this character clearly, many times, and gradually connect it to the protagonist's line

It can be seen that the author is very serious about writing, but there are too many long and difficult sentences in the big-character introduction. Generally speaking, it is considered a fairy tale at the moment. The heroine of the Dragon Clan should remember not to overwhelm the guest. Support with monthly tickets