Taoist Demon Subduing Record

The beginning of the story was too hasty. It told me about the family as if the setting was thrown away. In fact, it can be unfolded slowly, with a little clue here and a little clue there. In fact, the story has already become a routine. There is nothing wrong with the routine, it just needs you to stay a little suspense. For example, the starting environment of the protagonist and his master is too safe, and the master does not have that sense of mastery. You can obviously let him deal with the ghost the protagonist encounters at the door at the beginning, so why jump directly to ten years later and accept him as your disciple? Yes, you may want to create the mystery of the protagonist's life, but you can't just jump to ten years later at the most critical moment and then say that the master accepted the protagonist as his apprentice without any description. Come on!