Today Is a Boy, Today Is a Girl

In fact, I think, if you are not writing in AI, then my suggestion may be useful. I'm sorry, I didn't finish it, because there are many flaws, not the plot, but the writing. First of all, there are a large number of typos, perhaps so dense that three or four of them appear in 1,000 words (there is even a paragraph where the heroine's name is misspelled), and related words are used incorrectly. For example, you said that you traveled into this girl's body. You didn't say the reason later, but you just said that this girl's physical fitness is amazing. What is the reason? There are also missing words that you need to check carefully. Furthermore, as a common question, let's not talk about whether the settings are good or not. Don't throw away the settings as soon as you start. The real settings have already been thrown away by you. You have to throw it out in detail. If you must throw it away, just say that there are low-level, middle-level and high-level people in this world. Needless to say, it is resistant to low levels, rituals can be skipped, and high levels are used in the front and sequences are used in the back, which is very messy. There was no fighting before the male protagonist returned to his body. There is no need to write about this. Just write it down when needed. And the foreshadowing is really too straightforward. The fact that the female protagonist knew the male protagonist before is obviously a good foreshadowing and selling point, but you actually let the male protagonist say it directly at the beginning. I really had the patience to watch it, but I'm sorry, I really can't stand it anymore.