Water Margin: I'm Lu Qian, Liangshan's Pay-Me-More Guy

The position of the Leshan Giant Buddha should be given to the protagonist. Don't kill Gao Yanei at the beginning, just cut it off with Yongzhi. Later, he ran to Liangshanbo to find Zhu Gui, but he was almost made into a bun by being given sweat pills. After successfully counterattacking, he accepted Zhu Gui as his subordinate. He is worthy of being the protagonist. The pattern is big, so he accepts this kind of stuff.

The creativity is okay, but the plot is rough. Zhu Gui, who kills people and eats meat, is also accepted. He doesn't clean up the interior of Liangshan and kills people indiscriminately. Later, he engages in benevolence and righteousness. The Holy Mother has taken the throne and erected monuments. In the front, you have to kneel and swear when teaching the skills. It's not necessary to change to a more powerful one. It's all about thinking one thing at a time. If you can't be fair, you don't need to be strict inside and lenient outside. The protagonist is too much of a bitch.

The most annoying thing about writing Water Margin is writing it as a bandit's den. According to the current thinking, it would be best to write it in an upright and honest way towards the founding of the People's Republic of China.

Stop writing. When writing about Water Margin, you won't do anything about Liangshan. What are you writing about?

Fortunately, come on, write slowly and carefully

I couldn't even finish one chapter, so I just quit it. What the hell is the original Water Margin fairy tale world, the immortal martial arts, the spirit-suppressing guard, it's all embarrassing. If you want to be original, just create something original. The original work already has a mythological background, okay? A heart-breaking poisonous weed.

The creativity is fine, but the rest is rubbish.

Liangshan bandits, it is unreasonable not to kill them when your protagonist succeeds.

I'll take care of it and come back in a week.