Swallowed Star: Beginning as a Special Lifeform
吞噬星空：从特殊生命开始
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 72k Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi
- Subgenre
- Interstellar Civilization
- Updated
- 1d ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
35Chapters
6Votes
36Recs
2Fans
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Reader comments 7
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I've only read two chapters, so I'll tell you briefly.
This name does not match the protagonist's special life body, it is too dramatic The most taboo thing in fan fiction is that the protagonist wants to hug Luo Feng's thigh. Although you did not explicitly say that the protagonist wants to hug Luo Feng's thigh, you are trying to cover it up The character of the protagonist is too poor. He often talks to himself, his emotions are up and down, his words and actions are out of touch, which is too inconsistent Then there is the plot. The logic in many places does not make sense. It feels like the author writes whatever comes to mind, without considering the context and logic, and forcibly puts it together
It's better not to write it
This writing already seems meaningless, just a prediction of bad writing.
Suggestion
Cut it out, you are not suitable for writing books
Change it. Split the soul into. Divide and seize the house. How can you play with Luo Feng in the future? The original owner is stronger than you.
Brother, I would like to recommend my novel "Swallowing the Starry Sky: Simulation of the Heavens from the Desolate Era" to you. If it disturbs you, you can delete it directly. Thank you.
A companion treasure? What about your writing about The Great Desolation?
If you have any good suggestions, please mention them and I will add them to the book.