I Came to Judge Swords, So Why Am I Being Judged by a Sword?

The changes were pretty quick. Were the pictures before the changes written while sleepwalking? Looking forward to returning to the peak level. I haven't watched it since the change. I'll give it a try first.

The beginning of this new book is so uncomfortable. Isn't the golden three chapters a bit heavy-handed?

Kougua, that sword must have captured Touye because of Dangxing's hard work.

Polish it hard and strive to finish it at the starting point no matter what, so that the popularity can be accumulated. Generally speaking, your books are a bit niche, and they have to slowly attract popularity. You are always like this, and you are a very bad character.

It's becoming more and more a group literature At least the ygo and dnd we sewed are understood by casual readers Now it feels like it's almost becoming a clique literature

A classic slow start of small oral sex. It's really hard to watch from the front, but when it unfolds from the back, it starts to look better. It's annoying.

Is Toya a good girl?

There is indeed a big problem at the beginning. Like the previous book, there are a lot of settings that are impatient and incoherent and want to be stuffed into the readers. At the beginning, the more familiar the readers are with the world view, the better. Pull the readers out of their comfort zone and start bombarding them with information. You can do this at a high level. If the first chapter is introduced in this way, the protagonist participates in the interview, and the interviewer's questions are the replacement of keywords in the interview with the horse racing girl, showing the new and old world view of the sword racing girl, and the protagonist is a god who competes in the sword forging competition, and then says that the protagonist has perfect scores in the written examination and actual combat but was rejected because of lack of qualifications. It would be more comfortable to let the heroine appear to take over the rest of the plot. The combat settings should also be simplified. Take the skin of Xenoblade Chronicles, the trainer is responsible for slashing, and the sword is responsible for assisting the release of skills and surprising words behind him. Do you think readers prefer to read long descriptions of sophisticated rules and structures, or do you prefer to read about big luck and amazing words? Readers come to see the God and the fish, and save everything else if possible. The meaning of existence is to serve these two. The more gods and fish there are, the better the data.

King of Fighters Ten Nights, directly beaten ✊

It's a bit subtle, I say There is a slight contradiction in the beginning, what does it mean that most sword wielders are women, and then the second picture is that she is an extremely rare female swordsman Isn't it a bit bug And how did the male protagonist and his hard-working serious companions become hubbies🦐↓The female protagonist and her serious and affectionate male protagonist, the main point of view is quite hard to get used to