I Can See the Death Aura Around Them

Didn't you save the man? (Disappointed)

Why not invest in the city? It should be better to invest in the urban traffic for this kind of pyrotechnics. The writing is very good. At least the two heroines currently released are not so magical. Finally, I can see a heroine who is not so magical. Either this is a yandere, or it is because of family reasons. Who the hell is researching these crazy people.

The overall emotions of the characters are more realistic, and there are not many idioms and jokes on the internet. I like this better. Because I feel that when I read a lot of romance novels, the interactions between male and female protagonists are all trying to be funny and the characters are distorted. As a result, sometimes it is difficult to see clearly. But there are still many authors of light novels that have good plots and good emotional scenes. Things like mushrooms and snow cake chicken fork are actually pretty good, but there are many more that I won't list one by one. This book also has some small flaws, but the flaws are not outweighed. I feel that the core setting is actually a story about a male protagonist with a somewhat weird mentality and physical condition, and several girls. It can be seen that it is mainly about love. The other settings are not very rigorous, so there is no need to detail them. (In addition, I was banned by Xuebing for 50 years, so I had to open a trumpet to seduce him. It was very uncomfortable. Xuebing was so disgusting!)

How should I put it? It's not like online novels, it feels like published literature The plot is too fast and you still have to be careful when sorting out the plot. Come on

The writing is still okay. At least I kept reading the early stages and got to the point of catching up on updates. But I still hope to have a clear main line, or a clear development route, so that readers can know the approximate next development of the protagonist.

It feels like the plot is going here and there, and sometimes you're going to do this, and then you're going to do that.

The writing is very much like a domestic light novel, and has no Japanese feel at all. This novel feels more like a person's mental journey to me. It feels a bit like Immortality and Time and Space Hotel. If you have an outline, write it down! There is still a market for light novels of this type. Maybe the data won't look too good at first

As expected, it was cut.

It's pretty good, but the title is a bit off-putting.

Two advantages: warmth and finesse. The two minor flaws of this book are that it is relatively emotionally slow (it cannot lighten the characteristics of the novel, just for the sake of pulling). The second is that the background of the male protagonist is too weak. It has been hundreds of years, and his wealth and status should be very impressive. Also, novels like this tend to have a weak main plot. But it's very healing to like daily life