Ladies, Do I Also Want to Be a Contract Beast?

I don't feel like I'm the master. I just feel that the protagonist is very frustrated. Living in Monkey Mountain, you have to pay for various food, laundry and other services. Maybe it will be fun for the protagonist to turn around later, but I can't see the end.

The author's writing is very fluent. The subject matter is also quite innovative. But looking at the current direction, it feels like it's going in the same direction as other strategies and traversing the game world. The highlight of the introduction, the villainous daughter becoming a maid, was not shown and was left behind. Even if this highlight is not realized, chapters 8 to 14 are still very frustrating. There are a lot of people who are frustrated by the content of Chapter 6 or so and want to quit. In Chapter 14, the protagonist takes the initiative for the first time in the face of the annoying heroine, but there is no more pen and ink written about how she is frustrated by the protagonist. It feels like she has been frustrated for so long, and finally feels relieved, but it is gone in 3 seconds. Moreover, as the first female protagonist in a light novel, the contrast between her being deflated is also a highlight in itself. I don't understand why it is described briefly. Then there is this contract. The design of your contract is really difficult. It's about taking risks to earn a wife. But this wife's current personality is not lovable at all. The punishment is still direct erasure. This type of setting is no different from the system many years ago that forced the completion of tasks and would lead to death if the task was not completed. Novels in this setting type are almost extinct. Why do you think they are extinct? I'm curious if the editor didn't tell you about possible problems when he saw this setting? As for this contract, the contract requires that the heroine maintain her status unchanged, and what she gets is the other party's body, soul, magic power, etc. If you could really complete it, she would have fallen in love with you long ago based on her settings. Then there is no difference between the body, soul, magic and other rewards given by this contract. With this type of forced setting, you can't make the feeling of force disappear. Once it disappears, the feeling of pleasure will be gone. And you have given this kind of difficult and frustrating content, and the final result is that there is no special sense of satisfaction that is forced to set, only the experience of frustrating and demanding. Then there is the setting of the heroine. This annoying heroine fits your setting. But this kind of setting can easily make people get bored and run away. You have to make the heroine annoying the audience while intermittently inserting content that makes her feel deflated. Make readers feel better. You were like this for 6 chapters, but the only time you took advantage of her was not to write more.

Conquering women can only satisfy the low desire for reproduction. Real men should conquer other men! ! !

... Looking at the title of the book, even if it's not the invincible or sage-like style, it should be the funny or abstract style. How come this is a waste stream?

At the moment, I feel it's pretty good, and the writing is relatively smooth. However, the plot is a little less explosive and exciting, mainly because there is no main line, and the protagonist does not have a goal Logically speaking, conquering the heroine is a good main line, but on the one hand, the protagonist does not like the heroine, and at the same time, the conquest value/training value is a bit abstract for the heroine's mood, and it is not intuitive to go up and down, and there is no reward At the beginning, I saw that the heroine's conquest value had become -30, and I got the reward. I was also looking forward to what would happen if it became a positive number in the future. However, in the next paragraph, it changed back to -90, which greatly affected the fun. It is recommended to separate it. One is the training value (can be exchanged for rewards to control the heroine), and the other is the mood value (shows the status of the heroine) Finally, I still hope that the author will explain a main line as soon as possible. As the protagonist, as the leader of the strategy, he should have a clear direction of strategy when he travels into the game, instead of passively solving troubles.

All the poisonous points are gone, readers are welcome to taste it. If you have any questions, please feel free to point them out.

Investigation report: "Number" -757 Investigation target: "Transform into an all-female second game and be the master" - the male protagonist - [Yu Xiu] Investigation result: [Physical body travel (call from another world)] Judgment basis: Abnormal characteristics: A time-travel investigator, as the name suggests, is a profession that investigates and records the time-travel situations of time-travelers. It aims to let observers (that is, readers) in all worlds know in advance the time-travel situations of time-travelers in this world, and volunteers to provide observers with quick time-travel information query services If there are any fallacies, I hope to correct them ——All Souls Feast Zhenjun Stay on September 5, 2026

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