
Maybe I Can't Die?
也许我死不了呢?
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 114k Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Alternative Fantasy
- Updated
- 22h ago
- Source
- Qidian
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50Chapters
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The narration is not very good
For online novels, it is not recommended to write in the first person, but in the third person. Just write, there are indeed very few people who read in the first person, but the advantage of the first person is not used well. The first person emphasizes the sense of immersion, but the almost dialogue-like text eliminates this. For example Me: xx: Me: xx: Write less like this, too much is really annoying to the eyes. It is generally recommended to put the conversation content directly, and use quotation marks and conversation content to distinguish the words of different people. Then just move more and talk less.