The Half-Demon's Path to Immortality

Why can the two bloodlines be practiced separately? Why does practicing two kinds of exercises lead to twice the speed? Don't you think about the conflict between exercises? Since you can cultivate and there are enemies in the town, why don't you run away? Qi Ling's soul bloodline has been banned in this town, why not ask about it? Why do you have to stick to the same place? Change the place and you will have a brighter future. Lots of bugs in the plot

May I ask the author what use Qiling is to the protagonist? I can practice it, and there are dangers outside. There are dangers, father's weapons, and the old goat. Don't tell me. I don't know that Qiling requires signing an agreement. Anyone who wants to have a brain can just run away.

I sincerely seek advice from fellow Taoists. I really can't tell whether the words I write are good or bad. It's too easy to flatter myself. I'm always moved by myself. Please give me some advice.

I am a new author and I don't have a soft heart. I ask for your readers' advice. I also thank you for collecting, reading and recommending.

Little white text, the dialogue and psychological descriptions of the characters are unnatural.

I recommend Fentian's Half-Demon Raising Immortals, which is also good.

Thank you readers for spending your time to read this story. The author is a newbie. I am very lucky and was picked up by the editor. I still know my own strength. The writing is a mess. The writing style may not be as good as that of a primary school student. It may be contradictory in many places and the writing is not smooth. Please correct me if there are any mistakes. Thank you again for your support, readers.

I hope I can write a good story and encourage each other!

I am also new to writing novels. May our novel become a hit. 🙂

There is no heroine, she is self-interested + she forgets her roots + she is ruthless + she does not want the Holy Mother