One Piece: Hercules from the Valley of the Gods

As for the investment in scientific research, I'm sure you can afford it. Even the Yonko team in the original book couldn't afford it. Even the five old stars have a headache. They have invested so much. You want to raise a scientific team as a country.

Was Vegapunk recruited before Valley of the Gods? Will Zefa become a general?

It's okay at first, but later it's suspected that the protagonist's brain has been replaced, killing Oden's family, arresting the lady, and imprisoning her, just to cultivate artificial fruits in the future? This is not the first time. When I see a good person with abilities, my first thought is to capture them and use them as raw materials for fruits. What kind of rebellion can such a protagonist do? Being a dog for the Celestial Dragons and a marshal is faster to catch people. There is also a prison with raw materials that can be used.

Every time I see those original and messy Devil Fruit abilities, I feel embarrassed. The Saiyan form of the Ape Fruit and the Son Goku form make me sick with embarrassment. Come on, the original ones are in line with the world view of the Pirates. The Devil Fruit abilities are related to the wishes of the natives. Most of them are related to the basic phenomena and legends of the Pirate world. What the hell are you trying to incorporate modern European and domestic legends into? Forget it about Oda's own original creation of the Sun God. As the author, he can't help it. This setting is very embarrassing. The ability of other people to create these messy things is really embarrassing.

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Why don't you just write about the human fruit Zeus form? It makes sense to have a harem like this. 🤔

I was a little confused after reading it. The direction of the protagonist's progress was too vague and vague. For example, the protagonist keeps saying that he wants to change the world, but you write about how you change it. After two sentences, a few years later, what did the protagonist do to change the world? If you want to be the king of the mountain and farm, then you should at least write about farming. The improvement of the protagonist's strength and power is also mentioned in one stroke, and I don't know where it has been strengthened. Currently it seems that it is mainly used as a background board to quickly pass time, and the overall look is a bit confusing.

It's really better to change Revenge B's ability from Devil Fruit to a plug-in ability. It feels very awkward.

Original messy fruit, so embarrassing. That everyone takes the form of God, is eternal, and creates the world? Everyone will be in the form of the Emperor of Heaven, and he will be arbitrary for eternity.

Although I don't want to say it, you have caused some problems at this time.

Giantess? What's the difference between this taste and Jabba's? I beg to differ

Have you ever traveled through pirate time? Take some things for granted and write them randomly

It's quite an idea. No one has ever written about a hero turning into a fruit. There are just a lot of typos.

In fact, I feel that the author's writing style resembles that of AI. Author, please tell me the truth. Is it because AI wrote it that I slightly modified it?

Tolitoma is pretty pretty

I would like to recommend my own book, Pirates: Starting from Eating the Yamata-no-Orochi Fruit I am a newbie writing a book and hope to get some suggestions from readers.

In the legend, Heracles has the sword of Hermes, the bow of Apollo, the bronze shield of Athena, and the quiver of Hephaestus.

According to the world view of the pirates, Hercules should be the insect fruit, the unicorn bug of the phantom beast species, or the awakening of the phantom beast species from the power fruit (the captain of Blackbeard's first division)

Uncle B is laughing to death. Waiting for a Qiu B skill group

The author is great, I feel like the protagonist won't capsize if this continues.

Before going to the island: The protagonist is so arrogant and cool that Rocks doesn't dare to speak loudly. After arriving on the island: I was stepped on all kinds of times, the plan went unexpectedly and unexpectedly, and I developed kidney deficiency not long after the fruit was used.

Zhennima smiled. With this level of combat power, Whitebeard and Garin consumed most of their stamina before they even exchanged a few moves. , Almost seriously injured

You can't have an original fruit for every reason. Wouldn't it be disgusting to have an original fruit unexpectedly?

Can you see the physical prowess of Hercules? Why should we keep using Rongguang? Where is the carriage of the Sea of ​​Swords, the Sea of ​​Bows, the Sea of ​​Axes, the Sea of ​​Helms?

Will the author still write pirate fan fiction? 😠