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The Journey of Swordsman in the Dust Shang, a masterpiece to read

The fragrance of books in autumn. I was looking for books. I was looking for books, but I found a great work. It's my first time to visit. I've added it to the bookshelf. Welcome, and take a look at my new martial arts books. 😊

A return visit from a codeword enthusiast on the same site. The writing style is quite good, much better than mine. My writing is purely white. Tell me what you think after reading it! The narrative and narration descriptions are a bit too much, and there is no sense of immersion. As a reader, of course I hope to see words that can generate pictures and imagination in my mind, but this is indeed a difficulty that every author needs to face. Also, each chapter is too long, so there must be pressure to update. If you want to keep updating, you can ensure that each chapter is about 3,000 words. It may be better to ensure that 4,000-6,000 words are updated every day. Come on! Mutual encouragement!

Good looking, Yangji Qingtianlu, please read!