I Rely on the Fairyland Food Forum to Promote the Lower Realm

Bro, I came across your post, it's from a writer's assistant. What I said is for reference only. I am willing to listen, but I am not willing to listen. First, I wrote a whole page about the scene at the beginning, which almost convinced me to quit. Don't describe scenes in large areas in online articles, especially at the beginning. The beginning is so precious, do you use it to describe the scene? Isn't this a waste? Can't you write dozens of chapters later? Isn't it okay to just write the story at the beginning? Second, golden finger. What is the Fairyland Food Forum? I'm a little confused. It's better to go directly to the Immortal Forum and go to the delicious food. It feels like Xiuxian and food forums collide, a bit like watermelon paired with braised beef noodles... Third, dog meat is sold under the guise of a sheep. The word "promoted for next year" in your title, brother, I thought it was an invincible novel. The result is not? Then why do you use the word "horizontal push"? Change the title of the book. Fourth, your classification should not be the traditional Xianxia... Is it the wrong classification? Fifth, brother, give yourself a recommendation vote! Your current recommendation votes are 0. (I won't vote because I ran out of votes today) These are the questions. I suggest you go to Zhihu and read Wandering Toad's advice for newbies. You don't need to read too much. Just avoid the most poisonous points. (For example, the opening scene.) Enough with the shortcomings and suggestions. Here are some words of praise for you to prevent you from getting discouraged. The introduction is okay, the writing is not bad, and the story is okay. I feel like I'm not bragging... But, there is one thing I must brag about! That's persistence! I insisted on writing 170,000 words! Great! I haven't signed a contract, I have no readers, I have been single-player, but I still persevere! You are better than me. In the past, I cut the book directly before the editing team failed, without even waiting for cross-over... Keep it up! Although persistence may not necessarily lead to success, it is impossible if you don't persist! The final word is, persist but don't do it behind closed doors. If you don't sign a contract, think about how to sign the contract. Study other people's books and listen to the advice of the big guys. Perseverance is great, but if you go in the wrong direction, it's all in vain! Come on, we are not Penghao people! (Brother, I won't add books to the bookshelf. It's not that I look down on you, but I'm a bit obsessive-compulsive. I only add the books I like to the bookshelf, and then I don't read much about Xianxia...)