Heroine, I Really Didn't Mean It

Read Chapter 22 and evaluate it. The information density is too low, and there are too many psychological descriptions. The most powerful thing about Jin Yong's novels is the high information density. I have read 22 chapters of this novel, and I feel that the information density is too low. Let me talk about the plot of these 22 chapters. It is nothing more than being poisoned and having sex with a female sect leader at the beginning. Then he returned to the sect, introduced the background of the sect, and taught his younger disciples to practice dancing. Then he went on a date with the female lord again and went to a certain city to perform a mission again. Oh, these contents can be finished in 10 chapters, but you delayed it for 22 chapters. The plot is too watery and the information density is too low

Don't write the protagonist so stupidly that everyone can plot against the protagonist, or don't write about those flaws. You write about the protagonist again and again and don't care at all. You fall into the trap like a madman. Every time you go straight to someone else's trap, this kind of writing is really unpleasant.