Douluo: A Fake Sky Screen Reveals My Future

Dog-licking article, the author and the protagonist are Tang San's dog-licking dog Qian Renxue

The writing is quite good, and it is considered one of the better Douluo fanfics. I haven't found any poisonous points yet, and the description is relatively good. However, I feel that the proportion of the sky screen is a bit too large. At the beginning, it was said that there will be rewards for believing in the sky screen. Well, maybe the author forgot to write it. I will make up for it later. The ratio of your sky screen to reality should be six to four. This is the reason. It's relatively normal. After all, the main plot must revolve around reality. In addition, I personally think that the author's choice of platform is average. You put this book here and it's a bit of a waste. It's more profitable to go to Tomatoes. After all, writing Douluo fan fiction is still relatively disadvantageous at the beginning. Come on, author, if you slowly change it later and there are no poisonous points, I will continue to pursue it.

Alas, it's only the second chapter and it won't work.

Forget it, author, you have really underestimated the extreme arrogance in Xue'er's heart. No matter what happens, Xiao Xue'er will not share the same husband with others. 💀💀💀💀 With the previous description, I thought it was about a single female protagonist, Wen Le, but it turned out to be a story about multiple female protagonists. It was not included in the copy, and it was intended to deceive both parties into paying attention. Ugh, it's disgusting. However, as far as writing is concerned, it can be considered average, not very bad, not very good, just average. The description of Xiao Xueer's various clothes is quite detailed, and this is what makes it attractive.

The protagonist of the Dou Er fanfic is a time traveler who has a system and ran away after being given a god position. He was adopted by a soul beast at the beginning and has two god positions. One is the angel god given by Qian still snow One seems to be a natural god or something. The heroine is Gu Yuena, Wang Dong, Emperor Ruishu, Ma Xiaotao. Has anyone read this book? It was written several years ago and I really can't find it.

It's pretty cool, keep up the good work!

Hello readers, I will update three chapters a day this month. If the results are good, I will continue to update three chapters daily next month. Thank you readers for your support.

You can write about the women who once liked Tang San, otherwise it will make Tang San look bad, such as Meng Yiran, Huo Wu, etc.

After being put on the shelves, there will be three updates every day. Please support me a lot.

This process looks more and more familiar... Where did you borrow it?