It's a Long Way Home

Name: It's a Long Way Home
Author: Tangyuan Is a Fat Cat

回家，路好长

by Tangyuan Is a Fat Cat (汤圆是只胖猫)

Status: Ongoing
Length: 139k Words
Genre: Military
Audience: Male
Subgenre: War Fiction
Updated: 2d ago
Source: Qidian

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Outline of "Go Home" (490 words) Please note that this book is a fictional story. Veteran Lu Zhifan owes 8,200 yuan for his mother's dialysis. In desperation, he signed a labor contract in Heizhou, promising his family that he would "come back after working for one year." They were detained by warlords as soon as they landed, and more than 400 workers became prisoners of the black mines. Lu Zhifan used the military skills he had learned before to observe the guard patterns, and after his compatriots were shot dead, he launched a surprise attack to seize ordnance and liberate the mine. After seizing the mines, you can establish an armed stronghold by purchasing armaments, recruiting veterans, and contacting indigenous tribes. During the mining, a three-layer symbiotic giant ore (gold, lithium, platinum and cobalt) was discovered, and it was decided to take root for the long term. In the face of two sieges by the local warlord Hassan, he defeated the enemy troops and became famous. The surrounding tribes surrendered and the number of local troops exceeded a thousand. The number one general in the army, Shi Lei, made great achievements in battle, but because he was unwilling to be subordinate to others, he was instigated by Western capital to rebel. He launched a mutiny, the country was divided, and his friend Meng Yuan died for his country. In a desperate situation, Lu Zhifan used military tactics and intelligence warfare to stabilize his position. Shi Lei saw that he had become a puppet of the West and repented and asked for peace. The two heroes join forces to expel foreign enemies and regain the mountains and rivers. After the founding of the People's Republic of China after the war, Lu Zhifan was elected as the head of state. Shi Lei sacrificed his life in the civil war to atone for his sins, and Meng Yuan's family letters were handed down to the world. Lu Zhifan was tired of authority, delegated power and returned to the country alone. He stood at the door of his house and knocked three times. The door opened and she stepped aside. A bowl of porridge. Ten years later, I was caught by a bowl of porridge.

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The title of your book is very interesting. Well, when I read it for the first time, it still read like "The road home is too long." It also gave me a feeling that it had a great sense of story, but I just didn't know why it felt like something was missing. Then I also spent some time reading your work. Is the text density a bit too high? For me, just after reading the first chapter, it was already a bit difficult to read, which just increased the fatigue of reading. Then I also took a look at your profile and the comments behind each of your pictures. You really want to write a story like that, but you seem to be a little unable to do it. After all, you have also seen that the market for novel writers is now saturated. It is almost as if your works are difficult to take shape. Like me, they are unknown. Although I would like to say that AI short dramas or comics have begun to recruit novelists, but I am not sure whether the market will expand, but that is not the focus this time. Well, the first point of your title made me feel very big, but the article is very lacking. Just by reading the title of your book, I can think of a person's tragic fate and the feeling of not being able to go back home. However, the density of the article still dissuaded me, and I could barely read four or five chapters before I couldn't hold on anymore. If you really want to write this book well, you may need to think more about how to write it better, or to have a deeper feeling. If you don't consider these and just want to express yourself by writing what's in your heart, then your book has passed the test. Just like us, uh, even if we don't have many readers, we still have to write novels every day. Even if we write with all our heart, if we work hard to write, and if we imagine the kind of world just to make ourselves smile, then your article and this work have passed. Keep up the good work, comrade! Don't care about readers. Sooner or later, someone will see your efforts. Even if they don't, I suggest you do everything you can to promote your book. I usually have four accounts and try to push my own books out, but this platform limits me. No one will see your books except others who search deliberately. Either you develop on multiple platforms, or you work hard to continue writing, accumulate your own writing style and your own writing skills. After your level reaches a certain level, you may explode out again, and maybe someone will see it. Keep up the good work, comrade!
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