Douluo: Manhua Yu Xiaogang Template, Tang San's Mentor

The biggest problem is that the system directly brainwashes and transforms other characters from beginning to end. You set the protagonist and Yu Xiaogang to be twin brothers, which leads to the mutation of martial arts. And because of different concepts, Yu Xiaogang feeds carrots and the protagonist feeds meat. In this way, whether it is Bibi Dong, Flanders or Liu Erlong, they can It is more reasonable to connect with the protagonist, but what you did is directly brainwashing, replacing all their memories of Yu Xiaogang with the protagonist, and all the memories of Yu Xiaogang are gone. Flanders even wrote a letter to Yu Xiaogang before, and as a result, this memory was directly deleted from Flanders' mind. It's poisonous, extremely poisonous.

I think this introduction means that without a system, the protagonist is just a loser.

Buy promotion after only thirty episodes? Crazy

I feel like there is no heroine in this book or the heroine is of the same generation. It would be too disgusting to include juniors like Ning Rongrong and Zhu Zhuqing. There are also Liu Erlong and Bibi Dong. It wouldn't be too disgusting to include them.

Seriously, why don't you give up Liu Erlong to Flanders? Li Changsheng, Liu Erlong and Bibi Dong are almost one round older than each other. To put it bluntly, the two old women still want to eat young grass! 🙂

Although I really like watching iGang TV, it is still too uncomfortable to tamper with memories and change the past.

Brothers, in the subsequent development of this book, the author plans to create a brand new Shrek, but the members in it may be criticized, such as Dai Mubai and Ma Hongjun. If you want to maintain the original comic version of Shrek's Seven Devils, the author can keep it. If not, he can also arrange the plot to accommodate other characters!!!

The characters are very fragmented and the plot is really mindless. The people around me are as if they are blinded by the various unreasonable things in the protagonist group. The rules are weird.

After reading a few of them, I feel that your writing is very strange. The system has directly brainwashed everyone. You set the protagonist to be in his thirties, and the protagonist in his twenties is pushed forward twenty years to seven or eight years old. How can he be with Bibi Dong? Let me go.

All I can say is that it's a good beginning to start high and go low. The first chapter is a bit interesting. As soon as the system comes out, the AI flavor comes out, and then there is an intracranial orgasm. It's yy. Then I'll write it. Make a template and paste the original text directly, right? The protagonist has no highlights. It all depends on the system's brainless belt. The protagonist He was actually set to be 18 years old and was forced into Yu Xiaogang's plot line. It was a direct brainwashing method. The trinity of Naughty Baby and Liu Erlong summoned the dragon to fight BOSS for experience, and then had a relationship with Liu Erlong Bibi Dong. I didn't know who to call for a while. It was so irritating to my eyes. The more I watched, the more disgusting it became.