Everyone's Fighting Over Liu Bang, While I Take the Imperial Exam in the Qin Dynasty

Funny. Qin is rotten at its roots. Even if Qin Shihuang does not die and continues to rule for two years, he will still revolt. The entire country, including its laws, was designed around war. As a result, he stopped fighting. And it won't change later. Can the protagonist keep the Qin Empire from collapsing by himself?

It looks interesting, but the writing feels a bit dull. The social system is completely impersonal. I know that the author wants to express the strictness of the laws of the Qin Dynasty, and the phenomenon that more words and more mistakes in the official political system lead to more mistakes. However, I have read 33 chapters so far, and the protagonist and supporting characters have almost no interaction. Complete It's all about formulaic interactions, which means that the supporting characters have no specific image so far, and their facial makeup is serious. I haven't seen a flesh-and-blood supporting character, and there are a lot of inner one-man dramas. Although I admire the author for writing this way, I can advance it, because I know that this kind of writing is tiring, but it is boring to watch too much. Now that I see it, So far, blandness is the biggest shortcoming. There is no conflict and no climax. It is almost 100,000 words long. The short and medium stories are complete, but there is no small climax. According to online articles, 100,000 small climaxes and 300,000 big climaxes are considered consensuses This is the first time it has been so long-winded, mainly because it is really difficult to read. I have read such a good book with such flavor. The last book I read with similar feelings was Qin Li. I said so much because I was afraid that the author would think that the writing was not good and he would not read it. Anyway, it has been submitted. Come on, author, don't listen to my nonsense, follow your own ideas Finally, the author can join a group when he has time. Remember to kick me if you do.

For example, at first I couldn't understand the division between the bamboo slips and the book. I bit the bullet and slowly (￣~￣) read about ten chapters to understand it. There are also many crises in which the protagonist is more like a Riddler, and I can understand that he is laying the hook, but the language is a bit difficult to understand, so sometimes it is not until the protagonist gets what he wants that he understands a little bit (although there are many hints before, the NPC can only remember what he has experienced, and he has to vouch for it, and he must be able to tell his father, counting up to his grandfather), but it is still smoke and mirrors. Many of the protagonist's thoughts cannot be understood at once from a God's perspective. Then there are some setting doubts: 1. Why does it say in the introduction that everyone goes to find Liu Bang, Li Si, and Xiang Liang but they don't know Surabaya, or that not so many people find Liu Bang. If you know a little bit, Peixian County is at least known. History is the last one, but there should be people before it; 2. There is also a timeline. At the beginning, before the protagonist enters, he can check the strategy. It is said that it will take more than ten years to copy books, which is not cost-effective. Is there anyone who has been playing for more than ten years? 3. Status selection. Since you can choose aristocrats, why haven't there been people who choose military merit aristocrats? The military merit system of the Qin Dynasty was only mentioned in official documents as a mockery. 4. The setting needs to be guaranteed, but NPCs can only remember their own relevant information. Will those who choose nobles not be found out? There is it in the file, but no one can tell who his ancestors are. If he is a clan member of Da Qin (there seems to be a hint in the article), there should be a clan government apportioning it every year. Will there be any problems? The above are all minor questions, but the overall writing and the character design of the protagonist are very good. If nothing unexpected happens, I will continue to read 😁

Is that plot in Chapter 2 about burning books and entrapping scholars?

At the beginning, a new character was created after Han Gaozu was drawn in the lottery. Then there was no explanation of why the protagonist entered the history. The people next to the protagonist discussed the names of places with the protagonist, whether this person was an NPC, when they met him, and why they were so familiar with him. I thought I was reading the most mysterious stream-of-consciousness novel? And you still have to read the previous stream of consciousness novel

The protagonist's answer was written in a comprehensive and smooth manner, not like words spoken by a human being. 🤔

Does your game setting allow you to choose your place of birth and character? If possible, why don't some people experience and pass on being trapped there? If not, how did you choose the protagonist? And if possible, can famous figures be chosen? …

Scientific examination? Didn't that just start to exist during the reign of Emperor Sui Yang?

Please add a subject to what someone said or did. Your writing is too tiring to read.

Shuzuo appears in the latest part, which is inexplicable. The protagonist is inexplicably very good to Shuzuo. Shuzuo always looks at how the protagonist handles official duties, which does not conform to the official social atmosphere shown at the beginning, nor does it conform to the situation in the ancient government system. Moreover, the protagonist is too cautious to leave any traces on the forum, but Shuzuo has to watch in detail how to handle official duties all day long.