Swallowed Star: Starting with an Equipment Slot

After fighting monsters, who wants to watch the protagonist play house on earth? Also, author, you still don't understand that fists are power, and the protagonist has big fists, so it's easy to build a power or a martial arts gym. It's not that the protagonist goes to cooperate with the country, but the country begs the protagonist to cooperate. You must know that in the original work, Hong is the person with the most force and the most powerful person. If it weren't for Hong, to be honest, humans would have been destroyed by monsters, let alone laser cannons. This thing has great limitations. On cloudy days or digging holes from the ground, it can destroy humans from both inside and outside. In the final analysis, Hong killed the king-level monsters like chopping melons and vegetables, forcing the monsters to negotiate, and preventing the king-level monsters from attacking the base city, so that the remaining population could be defended. So if the secret technique of gold or something is ineffective on the protagonist, then it is of no use in training his subordinates. I personally don't object to the protagonist going to the battlefield, but just don't write the protagonist's status is too low compared to the country. That means don't write the protagonist as a loser.

There are two things about Swallowing the Starry Sky that I actually don't understand. That is, there is a legal slave trade. They are also human beings. As long as it is an uncertified planet, once you find it, it will be your slave force. There are also things like the world of immortality, but it is not so serious. It's okay if it is a low-level one. The highest-level slave force is actually a cosmic level. Another point is the issue of seizing the body. Even the clansmen of the leader of the Universe Kingdom can seize the body. Even if there are enough clansmen, aren't you challenging the majesty of the strong?

It looks good so far. It can remind you to be prepared for the crisis caused by the evolution of animals. Anyway, everyone already knows that RR will improve physical fitness. To prepare for animals, it is necessary to prevent it in advance. The original book said that the number of deaths is not only because of RR, but also because of monsters.

In the first chapter, I talked with my childhood sweetheart about how to defend against the virus and drop out of school. However, in the next ten chapters, I found a way to defend against the virus but forgot to inform my childhood sweetheart, causing my childhood sweetheart to be infected with the virus and about to die! There's definitely something wrong with this protagonist's brain

The author arranged for the protagonist to be imprisoned by Ruin No. 9 At a critical moment. This ancient writing method is somewhat deliberate and has the effect of screening readers.

The previous writing is pretty good, but the scene where the heroine is critically ill is too intellectually depressing. If this can be refined, the impression will be much better.

The protagonist is extremely brave on the battlefield. The official must launch the god-making plan, wildly publicize the protagonist's invincibility and the ease of killing lord-level monsters, and let the people know that there are still tall people who can hold up if the sky falls, so that they will not lose hope. This is the most important point. You must know that after the Golden Horned Behemoth was born in the original work, when the king-level monsters were raging, every battle between the council members and the king-level monsters was broadcast live.

To sum up, the idea is good, but the writing style is too immature, with a lot of lack of common sense and even unwillingness to check AI, and lack of experience in life and society. It feels like it was written by a real high school student or a student who has just entered college.

One thing I have always emphasized is that cultural workers must be educated and not blindly show off.

It's really boring to think that it can be the sixth force of another clan. There is actually a bug, so just take away the earth and build your own ethnic group of earthlings. Otherwise, we will still be exploited, which will be very miserable.