In the End of Dharma, People Penetrate the Heavens

Come on, author, by the way, the protagonist went through time and became Dong Zhuo. Author, you must go through time and become Liu Bei. You must carry out your glorious tradition. You must.

The first dungeon is too long and the pace is too slow. It would be best to end it with about ten chapters, then summarize the harvest, have a wave of reality, and then enter the dungeon again, and then slowly expand.

Author, you should come back and write normal Chinese entertainment articles. I really like Chinese entertainment articles😍. Just open another similar book without lingering on the edge of orthopedics.

If there is a group on Huayu, it would be best to talk about it in the group. In addition, some old books should also send out new book notifications.

6/34. Food and grass... Tend to be poisonous. I felt pretty good about the first three chapters, especially "Safety First". But suddenly the copy was cut in Chapter 4... Forget it.

The beginning is inexplicable. Three people named Wang appear in the first chapter, making you guess who is the protagonist.

Come on, come on, never forget China Entertainment

After reading just two chapters, I felt a very strong sense of old age, which is the so-called ancient style of writing by an old author. I clicked on the homepage and saw that he was indeed an old author. Otherwise, he keeps pace with the times and learns new things. After writing for so many years, is he still writing like this?

It's too protracted, and the plot can be watered down, but if you update more and water less, it's a waste of time.

🎭 Character: three good men: good woman, good woman, still good woman 🎬 Plot: As soon as I saw Lu Bu being replaced by Yu Jie, I knew this was not a bus to kindergarten. ✒️Writing: OK

Father-in-law, I have opened a new book 🙂. How long will it last?

Food and grass. It is very difficult to find a protagonist with all five poisons and no lower limit at the current starting point.