
Tokyo: Starting from Rescuing a Lovelorn Girl
东京:从拯救失恋少女开始
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 113k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Everyday Romance
- Updated
- 11d ago
- Source
- Qidian
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55Chapters
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Doesn't this plot explode?
In fact, there are many explosive plots in this book, but it's a pity that no one has read it...
Want to follow up
As the title says, I want to follow up on the reading. . .
If I don't write anything, what are you reading?
Some people have no hope of life and doubt themselves. . .
Hey, grandma, sign it, why not sign it!
I just bought one, come and support if you have nothing to do, and wish the author to sign the contract soon, so that I can also be blessed. Why haven't you signed up for the three-digit pursuit? The light novel section is too scary (already scared)
Comments and some suggestions
How should I put it? I usually don't give reviews or suggestions, so the suggestions may not be good or one-sided. First of all, in terms of advantages, the pace is really fast and there is not much nonsense. Some people may think it is too fast. This varies from person to person. Secondly, the background of Tokyo is also very realistic and atmospheric, such as Tokyo University, the subway, Akasaka, etc. In terms of characters, I think Tayama is a better character so far. However, the latter few don't feel very clear to me at the moment. After all, it's still early days. It's understandable. I hope that the characters and stories of each person can be enriched and expanded in the follow-up. Otherwise, it's easy to have the feeling that everyone likes the male protagonist but there is not much difference. In addition, I feel that the emotional development of the characters is a bit fast. Some female characters have not known the male protagonist for a long time, and the favorability level is faster. However, this is understandable in light novels. You can add some interactions and some plot foreshadowing, improve the details, and finally give me some suggestions. You can give some stumbling blocks to the male protagonist. Now he is handsome and has good grades. The emotional intelligence is high and the system rewards have been strengthened. This is certainly good. Occasionally, it can make you suffer, make mistakes, and grow up. I feel that such a character will be more real. If it is just perfect, I think it will be a little distorted. Overall, the author's writing is quite good. At least I think so, hahaha. It can also be seen that the author is very serious in writing. I look forward to the following plots. Keep up the good work.