Do I Want to Conquer Yours Too?

Before I clicked in, I had read surprisingly uniform reviews in the book circle, and I felt that they were all polished. After reading the latest chapter, it is indeed quite good. There are many tributes to the Lord of Mysteries, and many fusions are naturally worth reading.

Makes people look forward to the next results. But there are hidden caveats, such as how to deal with the relationship between the supporting characters maids and the protagonist next, which makes people worried.

I read the title as "I Want to Attack Your Mom Too"

This book is to the Lord of Mysteries what the magical girl Illya is to Fate

The plot setting is very novel, a bit similar to a book called My Yunyang Girlfriend I had read before. This film is about the female protagonist watching the male protagonist, but what the female protagonist sees is created by the male protagonist for her to see, which is very interesting. The daily drama is interesting.

Like the title, I saw the ghetto mentioned many times in the book, the female character helps the ghetto, and the protagonist mentions the ghetto. In the extraordinary world, just pursue the extraordinary. Why do you care about strangers in other worlds who don't want to do it? There is no need to write about them. Maybe the author wants to write that the protagonist is kind? Is the heroine kind? Is this necessary?

Don't comment in the comment area whether it's Yinghuo or not. If it's really Yinghuo, if you find out that he is Yinghuo, he will stop acting immediately. When the time comes, cut it if you want. If he didn't point it out, he would still act.

Now that I am reading Chapter 41, I suddenly discovered a problem. Alyssa was a noble lady who had been exiled since she was a child. She later became an adventurer, accumulated a lot of wealth, and returned to the royal capital to seek revenge. In this context, she should be very familiar with the living conditions of gangs, gangsters, poor people, adventurers and criminals at the bottom of society. However, in some recent plots about servant theft, gangs and slums, Alyssa has shown to be as ignorant as the noble ladies in the same industry. Although she understands that it is to set off the protagonist's intelligence and create her dependence on the protagonist, this is inconsistent with her background. Alyssa can be stupid and rely on the protagonist, but she cannot always be stupid and rely on him in all aspects. A senior adventurer should have rich experience and experience, and have her own uniqueness. The difference between her and ordinary noble ladies must not be the level of force value. At present, the three-person heroine group is very homogeneous. Although the author has been trying to emphasize the differences between the three people through literal descriptions, in terms of reading experience, apart from the fact that the three of them are all naive and have a large difference in force value, they do not have a very distinct impression. As far as Alyssa's background is concerned, plots involving gangsters, poor people, and criminal gangs from the bottom of society should be her highlight moments. The protagonist only needs to be reminded at a few critical moments, rather than being guided in detail throughout the process. Quality rather than quantity, and don't overwhelm the guest. When it comes to struggles and conspiracies of nobles, palaces, upper class society, and general trend judgment, the protagonist needs detailed guidance to highlight the value of the male protagonist The daily part is very well written, I hope the author can pay attention to the other parts in the future

This book is suitable for adding some scenes of cuckolding by the heroine.

Even if it is a game, who can accept that the protagonist in the game mocks him or her all day long, thinks about changing jobs every day, and even peeps at himself, let alone a development game?

Although I can understand the romantic comedy-style story, is the character of the heroine really suitable for such a bitter and resentful background? The sense of dissonance is a bit strong

I feel that the core of the story is just boring. The writing style of the setting was originally very good, and the heroine did not interact directly with the hero to attract people to read. As a result, the entire slum plot is not interesting at all and it is a grand narrative. If you read it as a daily love story, you don't want to read this kind of plot 🙂 Although it is understandable that the author wants to expand the main line and make the plot longer 🥵

I have seen the moderator with similar settings 🙂

I've seen the latest, and I'd like to talk about my feelings after reading it: 1. There are too many jokes about breast size, which is a bit aesthetically fatigued 2. The relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist has no real progress. Most of the time, the female protagonist reads the diary, and the two of them have very little time to talk 3. The female protagonist is quite cute, but I feel that she should have more unique personal charm. Now she spends most of her time looking like a "curly baboon" What kind of image 4. The current interactions between the male and female protagonists are the female protagonist being helped by the male protagonist or complaining about the male protagonist's affairs with various girls. I feel that there can be more types, such as warm or submissive ones Also, I don't know if anyone has watched "The Hayate the Butler". It is a very old series. The male protagonist is the housekeeper and the female protagonist is the eldest lady. It is very good-looking. If you like this kind of relationship, you can watch it

From a technical point of view, it is already very good, basically reaching the level of a hit, but some details can be discussed: 1. The issue of the heroine design. The character design is weak, and the distinction between the characters of the three heroines is not widened. When she is unable to fight, the first heroine acts as a complainer and a vase, and does not see the characteristics of an adventurer and her determination for revenge 2. The problem of flat-chested jokes that appear many times, in turn, squeezes the space for the heroine's portrayal, resulting in insufficient memory points except for the flat-chested label. And the joke appears several times to be the punchline, and repeated occurrences will inevitably make people suspect that the author is dead 3. The relationship progresses too fast. There is no reason why the female protagonist can fall in love with the male protagonist just by reading his fake heartfelt voice. There is not enough emotional foreshadowing. And if you like it so much now, how will you deal with the plot in the future when the male protagonist switches to another place? 4. Problems with the portrayal of the male protagonist. There are too many perspectives of the female protagonist, and very few involving the perspective of the male protagonist. Apart from knowing that the male protagonist wants to become stronger, I basically know nothing about him. Too many descriptions from the heroine's perspective also make readers prone to aesthetic fatigue Thinking of these for now, the above

After watching it, I feel that the characters are seriously homogenized. Elsa is no different from other aristocratic ladies. Although she is an adventurer in the setting, whether it is low-class life or gangsters, helping orphans, there is a feeling that I have never seen before. It depends entirely on the protagonist, and it feels like gauze. So, what is the original plot? Three idiots causing trouble in the capital?

The portrayal of the heroine becomes more and more of a failure. It is perfectly fine to set the family background to be like Mei or Ai, who has a happy, silly and sweet family, but you set it to be an Avenger and a high-level transcendent.

Can you be normal? The heroine is so weak and hasn't been played to death?

There is a high probability that this book will have eunuchs. After dozens of chapters, many readers are starting to get tired of it. If they don't come up with some new tricks as soon as possible, if the results are not good when it is released in a few days, this old man will be in again.

The heroine is a silly fool, and then she comes to the capital alone to seek revenge against her enemies. It's up to the hero to think about anything. Does the heroine think she didn't die quickly enough?

After reading the current chapter, it's quite good. Come on, the author, and keep updating steadily without losing track. The future is promising 🙂

The anti-panel setting at the beginning is very attractive, but giving the protagonist the snake oil ability of "I am looking for power" feels like child's play. This ability will deprive the protagonist of all aspects of growth, and will test the author's writing skills, making various battles nonsensical and boring. According to the current development of the plot, I will probably forget about this book tomorrow.

I think there is something wrong with the latest pictures. I was catching up on them and saw that there were still 7 or 8 pictures left. Then I clicked on them many times and then quit by myself. I couldn't read any more. I think there must be a problem with this part.

Just look at the first chapter From the novelty and hook of the setting to the transformation of scene space to the rhythm control of the characters' dialogue and action He is definitely an old monster from outside the world.

At first I really had high hopes for you, but now I just want to ask, author, do you have any unforgettable obsession with breasts?

It's okay. The bear jokes are a bit too dense and I'm a bit tired of aesthetics. I'll try some other jokes.

It can't be a firefly. . This way of describing is unacceptable 😭

The perfect description of daily life reminds me of a certain teacher named Chi. At the same time, I also began to worry about the probability of the completion of this book...

It's still the same old problem, the progress is too fast, the technique is already very strong, it has really reached the level of 100,000 orders, the points are coming out very quickly and very densely. Your 80,000 to 90,000 words of character attitude changes are enough for Honey Chicken to write 200,000 words. 20,000 Words complete the plot cycle, and it's still a Western fantasy. With 80,000 to 90,000 words, you can only expand other characters horizontally, and then lose the sense of substitution and subscription 🙂 Don't cut it this time, don't worry about losing subscriptions, write a few more big loops, and you can make a lot of money.

Every word is the same as in the Xinhua dictionary I have read. If you mess up the order, is it original? 😡