Do I Have to Win You Over Too?

The previous settings are really good, but the further you go, the more things go wrong. The main plot progresses normally. There are too many jokes about Big Bear and Little Bear. Doesn't the adventurer Alyssa have no brains? There are two other protagonists, so the character creation is a bit one-sided. There is also a practice system, which seems to have not been clearly explained in more than forty chapters. Only spirituality, demigods, magic, etc., One prop, one event can write four or five chapters. Are you really dead? You said that the protagonist Simon understands the entire game, so it's okay to keep giving Alyssa implicit suggestions. But what about Alyssa's enthusiasm for learning in the early stage? I have been to the East District so many times, and I still don't want to know more about the East District. I really treat Simon as an external brain. Then how did she survive as an adventurer? Did she rely solely on force? She just wants revenge in her head. She won't read newspapers or anything else. So if she wants to take revenge, doesn't she want to look for and check anything that expands her relationship? It seems that only the protagonist Simon has a brain. The three existing protagonists are all curly-haired baboons, and they have been imposing labels on them such as smart, rich, etc...

Before I clicked in, I had read surprisingly uniform reviews in the book circle, and I felt that they were all polished. After reading the latest chapter, it is indeed quite good. There are many tributes to the Lord of Mysteries, and many fusions are naturally worth reading.

Makes people look forward to the next results. But there are hidden caveats, such as how to deal with the relationship between the supporting characters maids and the protagonist next, which makes people worried.

I read the title as "I Want to Attack Your Mom Too"

This book is to the Lord of Mysteries what the magical girl Illya is to Fate

The plot setting is very novel, a bit similar to a book called My Yunyang Girlfriend I had read before. This film is about the female protagonist watching the male protagonist, but what the female protagonist sees is created by the male protagonist for her to see, which is very interesting. The daily drama is interesting.

Don't comment in the comment area whether it's Yinghuo or not. If it's really Yinghuo, if you find out that he is Yinghuo, he will stop acting immediately. When the time comes, cut it if you want. If he didn't point it out, he would still act.

Like the title, I saw the ghetto mentioned many times in the book, the female character helps the ghetto, and the protagonist mentions the ghetto. In the extraordinary world, just pursue the extraordinary. Why do you care about strangers in other worlds who don't want to do it? There is no need to write about them. Maybe the author wants to write that the protagonist is kind? Is the heroine kind? Is this necessary?

It looks very attractive from the beginning, but this is all I have to write about. It is quite interesting to play jokes occasionally, but it is not interesting at all to play all the time. The characters are not established and the main plot is not established. It is a bit boring after reaching 40 chapters.

There is a high probability that this book will have eunuchs. After dozens of chapters, many readers are starting to get tired of it. If they don't come up with some new tricks as soon as possible, if the results are not good when it is released in a few days, this old man will be in again.

I didn't grasp the rhythm. The transition was too abrupt. The decisive battle started out of nowhere. There was no foreshadowing at all. It's not going to be TJ.

Even if it is a game, who can accept that the protagonist in the game mocks him or her all day long, thinks about changing jobs every day, and even peeps at himself, let alone a development game?

Now that I am reading Chapter 41, I suddenly discovered a problem. Alyssa was a noble lady who had been exiled since she was a child. She later became an adventurer, accumulated a lot of wealth, and returned to the royal capital to seek revenge. In this context, she should be very familiar with the living conditions of gangs, gangsters, poor people, adventurers and criminals at the bottom of society. However, in some recent plots about servant theft, gangs and slums, Alyssa has shown to be as ignorant as the noble ladies in the same industry. Although she understands that it is to set off the protagonist's intelligence and create her dependence on the protagonist, this is inconsistent with her background. Alyssa can be stupid and rely on the protagonist, but she cannot always be stupid and rely on him in all aspects. A senior adventurer should have rich experience and experience, and have her own uniqueness. The difference between her and ordinary noble ladies must not be the level of force value. At present, the three-person heroine group is very homogeneous. Although the author has been trying to emphasize the differences between the three people through literal descriptions, in terms of reading experience, apart from the fact that the three of them are all naive and have a large difference in force value, they do not have a very distinct impression. As far as Alyssa's background is concerned, plots involving gangsters, poor people, and criminal gangs from the bottom of society should be her highlight moments. The protagonist only needs to be reminded at a few critical moments, rather than being guided in detail throughout the process. Quality rather than quantity, and don't overwhelm the guest. When it comes to struggles and conspiracies of nobles, palaces, upper class society, and general trend judgment, the protagonist needs detailed guidance to highlight the value of the male protagonist The daily part is very well written, I hope the author can pay attention to the other parts in the future

Every time Yinghuo's IP is Jiangsu

This book is suitable for adding some scenes of cuckolding by the heroine.

After reading Chapter 58, I felt that there were too many breast gags, which was quite boring. Then, the male protagonist seemed to only exist in the diary. There were not enough positive descriptions of the male protagonist. He seemed a bit tired.

I've seen the latest, and I'd like to talk about my feelings after reading it: 1. There are too many jokes about breast size, which is a bit aesthetically fatigued 2. The relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist has no real progress. Most of the time, the female protagonist reads the diary, and the two of them have very little time to talk 3. The female protagonist is quite cute, but I feel that she should have more unique personal charm. Now she spends most of her time looking like a "curly baboon" What kind of image 4. The current interactions between the male and female protagonists are the female protagonist being helped by the male protagonist or complaining about the male protagonist's affairs with various girls. I feel that there can be more types, such as warm or submissive ones Also, I don't know if anyone has watched "The Hayate the Butler". It is a very old series. The male protagonist is the housekeeper and the female protagonist is the eldest lady. It is very good-looking. If you like this kind of relationship, you can watch it

Is the horny boy going to be a mess this time or is he going to be a eunuch?

The plots, battles, and slightly larger scene descriptions in these two chapters have been completely useless recently. I don't know if it's because of your pressure to save manuscripts or some other reason. If your writing skills are really bad, use AI. I'll pretend you can't see it. These two chapters are really not as good as a tomato.

Is this guy a firefly?

Although I can understand the romantic comedy-style story, is the character of the heroine really suitable for such a bitter and resentful background? The sense of dissonance is a bit strong

Damn it, I didn't know Yinghuo or anything. I just found a new book that was pretty good. I was a little panicked when I read the comment section 🥵

Isn't the male protagonist good? Why do I keep writing marginalia? Is there any substantial progress?

The writing is actually okay, but I just don't have the desire to read on. I don't know why🧐

I worked so hard to find you😭😭

Once or twice is okay, the whole plot is composed of prompts in the log + maid interaction in the log + almost missing the prompt + the heroine discovers that she is a saint in front of others. When you're exploring information or communicating with other female characters, wouldn't it be okay to switch to the male protagonist's perspective? The entire relationship between the characters is reflected in the third-party diary account, as if the outline is directly thrown out, telling the reader that their relationship has increased. It doesn't matter if you change the perspective, it won't lose its novelty so quickly.

The previous opening is really amazing and interesting, but it started to get complicated from the sudden decisive battle in the palace. First of all, the combat power system is blurred. Although this is a light novel, the plot progresses in addition to light curtains and battles and conspiracies. As a result, the description of the extraordinary system is amazing. In the latest chapter, I still don't understand how many levels of extraordinary are strong in a Victorian era with firearms... The protagonist's time travel has a golden finger feeling that makes me wonder-how far can he do it? How can one restrain a demigod? How much of the plot do you know? How was he resurrected later? Finally, there are the supporting characters. I spent a lot of time writing about Alyssa, but after changing the plot, she disappeared... The epileptic king killed so many people and was cleansed. The so-called sister Alyssa was a little foreshadowing (the comment said it was a hint, which is far-fetched).

Although, I don't know if I'm too sensitive, but Hotaru Shouma not only used Xia Qiu as her surname before, but also used Nan. In other words, Southeast and Northwest are also among the surnames commonly used by Hotaru Shouma, and Simon, the protagonist of this book, corresponds to Nishi.

One cannot step into the same river 11 times...

The setting is very interesting, but the characters are not very good. Due to the need to frequently switch to the perspective of the heroine, there is no sense of immersion. It is too daily and seems a bit monotonous, but it is good for those who like daily life. In short, it can be regarded as a spice that can be read interspersed with other books. I have no desire to finish it in one go, and the sense of immersion is still too low.