Martial Flames Across the Starry Sky

The plot is quite vicious, and the protagonist's side must be described as a silly and sweet force that is suppressed to death by the villain's forces. The protagonist's luck or some kind of chance will probably make a comeback in the future. Anyway, this plot is quite disgusting.

I feel like the latest version is too rubbish. There is a strong master, the apprentice is surrounded and killed, no one comes forward, and there is no official power.

The author's basic skills in writing are pretty good, but the character creation is poor, and there is no sense of expectation in the character. Then the cultivation system is written with no feeling and no sense of expectation. But if it is a quick read, three or four lines at a glance, it is okay to barely read it. I feel that it can last for thousands or more days in the future, and then I will add the world view and various systems. , Write better characters and stuff, and then write people's expectations for a higher level and write some small and large plot points. It's not bad to have high-quality products, but if it is less and does not improve the character creation, world view and system creation, then the quality level will definitely be useless. It will be mediocre if it is pleasant, and the density will be too low...

Whether it is fragrant or smelly, let me taste it and I will know😋The King of Akaishi is here

He uses his own parents to promote the development of the plot, and uses his sister's congenital disease to make the protagonist work hard to become stronger. They have always put pressure on the protagonist. There is a reason why more than a hundred of them cannot be put on the shelves. Use it for practice, and it's okay to disgust readers by the way!

You are going to school hard and making progress every day.

What are these pictures about?

A girl who was a sophomore in high school asked at home how she could be with a poor boy. What a fantasy