Douluo Continent Mortal Biography

It's pretty good. The introduction at the beginning is a bit stiff, but you can clearly see the progress in the back, which is much smoother. I hope I can continue writing!

It's very interesting. I've read a few chapters. I hope the author will update it soon.

You have defeated 99% of fan authors, although there are still flaws.

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The plots are interlocking and the characters are vivid and three-dimensional. The protagonist gradually grows from an unknown little person to a unique hero. The setbacks and growth experienced in the process are moving. The villains are not simply evil, but have complex motivations and backgrounds, giving the story more depth. The foreshadowing laid in the story is echoed one by one in the following chapters, and the turning point is unexpected but reasonable. The author skillfully uses flashbacks and interludes to intersect the timelines without causing confusion, and instead adds a sense of suspense and tension. The description of each scene is detailed and vivid, making readers feel as if they are actually there.

Good writing, keep up the good work, I hope there will be more

It's also very delicious, come on, meow

It's quite good. I read many fast-paced novels, but it's also good to read this kind of slow-paced one.

It's pretty good so far, nothing bad. I suggest Douluo's world view be expanded appropriately. The original map is too small, and there are many places where the left and right brains interact with each other.

The early stage is mainly foreshadowing, and after chapter 40, it will be connected to the original work to ensure continuous enjoyment.

Come on, come on, come on 🙂

The writing is quite good. Since it is a slow-burning novel, let's look forward to how the protagonist slowly grows from a small character. I hope that the follow-up climax will come soon. After the foreshadowing, it will be more enjoyable.

The biggest problem with fan fiction is to write new ideas within the original system

The lifespan of a ring is really high, everyone is six to seven hundred years old. Not mortal at all

The author has never read the original work! I came to the junior soul master academy of Qingshi Town in Ruoding City. A 6-year-old kid can't even recognize all the characters. There are a lot of other loopholes. After reading six chapters, I can't stand it anymore.

Is it based on AI? I feel there are many traces of AI writing.