Man Is in the Last Days, and the Ancient Gods Are Resurrected

It's the end of the world for such a mentally retarded Madonna style. Two women in the same house who hate the protagonist first rape and then kill and enslave them. This is a decisive doomsday theme.

A very orthodox post-apocalyptic novel, which is pretty good for me so far, but it may not be suitable for the general public, the kind of work that needs to vent emotions.

The writing is quite good, so why not cut it?

Damn, I didn't see it before, but I just saw it now. Was it sent directly to cross-examination and signing? Or did you delay signing the contract on purpose?

So far, in terms of reading experience, I personally have no problem, but if I want to go further, I feel that the abuse or frustration is greater than the pleasure, which will affect the audience ability of the work. For example, the two sisters are very disgusting, but the reward point after the frustration or the pleasure are inappropriate. The next thing is the frustration of facing Li Dan. The description was uncomfortable for a while. After the matter was resolved, the relief was just a simple description of being followed and trusted. It was difficult to see the rewards. Finally, Dong Heng's decision is a bit sudden. If there was some foreshadowing before, it might be easier for readers to accept it. However, such a sudden situation brings abuse or a sense of frustration to the protagonist (for readers), and it will feel like writing a plot for the sake of writing a plot. I hope this can be helpful, and I hope other readers will be merciful to the author after reading this comment.