Yu-Gi-Oh!: Yugi's Fateful Struggle

Looking at the recommendation, it doesn't look like someone who wants to survive, it looks like a show-off plus a rotten person.

It is recommended that the author change the title and introduction of the book. There is no "Yu-Gi-Oh" in the title of the fan book about Yu-Gi-Oh, or even "dueling" or "playing cards". The introduction is also a big mess of words, with no paragraphs or focus, making it difficult to get into the main text.

It's very good, but I still recommend changing the title and introduction. The title is really not good, and the introduction has an inexplicable feeling. If I didn't like to read reviews and read reviews that said it was good, I almost missed this book.

The introduction is very interesting, and the feeling of playing with jokes and capturing the essence of the characters is very attractive. But in the main text, there is still a lot of room for improvement in character creation. It feels like every character has a similar tone and shares a library of memes... Many obviously interesting memes are used in very inconsistent places. For example, the most obvious one, the "Shark Sky" memes appear in Asuka's psychological activities.

The plot made me want to delete the book, it was bland.

If you are not a mature author, you won't be able to post pictures.

I would like to give you a suggestion. The author's book is very good, but it is best to include pictures in the text or short posts. The Yu-Gi-Oh books with the best results all have pictures. After all, Yu-Gi-Oh is updated too fast. Just like the previous genome deck is exclusive to tcg, it is new and many people don't know it. If necessary, I can recommend bloggers who update the cards

Hey! What a mouthful! The author will update quickly

It is to turn all the other Zach clones into girls. Of course, I mainly thought about it, and I think it is quite interesting. After all, except for the protagonist, it feels very happy to turn the other clones into women. This is just a mention. It doesn't matter whether the author adopts it or not. What I want to ask is whether the comic version of the Fusion Dragon can be used. After all, although the comic version has a very abstract plot, the girlfriend becomes a mother. However, the comic version of the dragon is still strong. Although the actual card effect of the Hungry Gu Dragon is not as versatile as the Hungry Poison Fusion Dragon. But the effect is quite interesting. It invalidates and copies the opponent's effect, then reduces the offense and defense by 500 points, and gives 500 points of effect damage. There is also an evolved type, the Hungry Gu Death Dragon. Although the fusion material requires three dark attribute pendulum monsters, the effect is invalid for the entire opponent.

One thing to say, the plot is quite good, but obtaining the deck depends entirely on the Dark Duel (go grab it) And the opponent has a reinforced deck Although the protagonist is a card player with modern thinking and has a lot of information advantages But the opponent has a reinforced and superb deck It feels a bit subtle.