Cultivation Begins with a Rickshaw Puller

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You know what superfluous things are, and this book is it. Spiritual roots are alive and immortal, just like parasites. They are also kind-hearted and wise. This setting is an idea created by Barrett.

I discovered that a new book has just been released. Is it the one who wrote about the end of the world and the city in danger?

Is the author really an old author? It feels like there are really a lot of problems. The first one is that the background of the Republic of China is actually not suitable for cultivating immortals. It feels a bit inconsistent, but it is more suitable for martial arts. In my impression, most novels with a world view background in the Republic of China are martial arts novels. The second one is that the setting is confusing. I made a setting where the spiritual roots are alive, the spiritual roots still have the Internet, and information can be obtained. It is too messy. I wanted to come up with some fresh settings, but the result is obviously the opposite, because this setting requires readers to think and remember, but it is boring. The third one is at the beginning. A small half of the chapter is devoted to the protagonist's original story and the female supporting character. It's a bit long-winded. What readers want to see is the protagonist, and the original owner doesn't need it. Why let him occupy the space? The early plot was still confusing and boring. Just after reading a few pictures, I found a missing word, which is that a certain male supporting character came to the protagonist's house. There is a passage that says this is the residence of Che Fuyang. Is there a surname missing?

I came over Douyin and took a look. The coalition government, immortals, and immortals are equal. There is too much and too complicated information at the beginning, and the protagonist appears too late. Moreover, with the protagonist appearing late, readers thought that they could watch some directly useful plots at this time. In the end, you made a strange plug-in, and then the fifth level of body training. The readers are completely impatient. To summarize, ideas are okay. Newcomers like to think wildly, which is equivalent to fantastic ideas, but your writing power cannot support the content you want to express. Suggestion: Be honest and read the new books on the list, and then write according to popular routines. When you are really strong in the future, you can write what you want to write. If it's not for perfect attendance, you can cut it.

I read it and found it to be quite well written. The road to enlightenment is long, and practice is never-ending. Three thousand avenues, there is always one that is your way. Cultivation novels will never go out of style. Come on, monks, we have a promising future.

I've read a few chapters and it's quite interesting. I've saved them and will read them together when I save more. Cheers to the author!

As expected of the protagonist, there are all kinds of troubles when he travels back in time.

I feel like there are no highlights and the plot is so bland.

Emmmm... The writing style is a bit off, but it feels like a combination of novels from many years ago and current novels, and the subject matter is also good. That is, I feel that the author looks a bit concise and capable, but in fact he is chatty and keeps setting up the narration. Then there are so many characters appearing, and there are also inner dramas. This is a bit unbearable... It is too unsmooth and the plot is boring.