Tenfold Cashback: Enjoy the Good Life

It's very well written, I hope it can be updated more often

Remember to get some wives for female characters, I like this

It's too long-winded, and the plot and characters are also quite poor.

My list of new books by authors I follow does not show your book. The author's books are not exposed enough.

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The foreshadowing is too long. It's a systematic article, not a direct business article.

I felt there was a problem after reading the first chapter. If the author wants to describe the character, you can describe it from the side, write about the place of residence, the confusion and pressure of not being able to find a job, and write about the fact that the family is generally small and transparent in school, the food and housing are not good, the personality is introverted, and there is a lot of nonsense and fantasy. It is too separated from normal people, and readers have no sense of empathy. When I write about teachers later, you haven't shown any merit. Why should I treat you differently if I am a university teacher who is very beautiful and has a good family background? If you are successful outside the system, and then meet your teacher by chance, the strong contrast will make her interested in you. Do you a favor and highlight your energy, and you can write about the harem. It is more comfortable and natural. If you write it like this now, people can still read it because of the talented writer. When it comes to shelves, it will definitely be bleak. Even if it is a great novel, you must have a main line, maybe seeing different scenery, emotional satisfaction, career achievements, pretending to be cool is just fun, this is a full emotional line.

Is the author full of passion?